Please do not submit tests to the Portal.
Please do not resubmit things that have been blammed by the Newgrounds community.
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines
If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, which you don't want.
The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission
Good luck. :)