Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Laura Vierra Animal in me]

The "music" killed the mood, and really ruined the entire thing. Also, please complete the thing, rather than submitting a part 1 and part 2, which is just a waste of peoples' time. :\

XavierStarr responds:

Terribly sorry you feel that way, the music itself was the inspiration to do a Portrait of the vocalist, so felt the need to include it, but I will re-consider music choices for future videos, and work on combining multiple sessions into one Video instead of having them segmented.

Appreciate the review. :)

[Sticky the Stickman Intro]

It's not bad, but why submit the beginning of a show and leave off the show? It's pointless to submit only one part. :\

Sonicyay2 responds:

It's not done yet.
Y'know, some people might like to see a taste of what's coming before it even happens.
I mean, an intro is in every episode.
And......you get the point, Episode 1's not done yet. Heck, this is as far as I've gotten so far.

[Kojima Leaves Konami]

You had a good score til the live action bit. Live action is generally considered 'distasteful' around here anyway, but still, that part seemed disjointed and detracted from the whole of the piece. :\

JumpNJetz responds:

Aw man, it really sucks that you feel that way. The point was to show the direction they would head without Kojima on board and how they would make a shitty mobile version of Metal Gear and ruin the franchise. At the time of making this parody it felt right to have live action for the message we wanted to give. Sorry we couldn't convey that message more properly. Thanks for the review, it really helps since the idea of having a live-action was very experimental.
-Jetz

[Need advice(shitty clip)]

You put the arm on a 3rd layer, on top pf the other 2. Using the same color for the clothes, and matching it up perfectly will make it look like one piece, and it will blend.

With that being said, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

Kawlum responds:

Thanks a lot! Sorry about that my bad, will do in future! :)

[Deathly Swallows Intro]

There was the 3 Rabbtis intro, and then there was the beginning credits, but then there was nothing. There was no episode. 0/5 now, since it was incomplete. Finish it, or upload the correct, finished file and we'll see what we've got! :)

3rabbitsproductions responds:

It was the introduction...go to scene 1, which is the next video.

[SHINE ON-The Cat (ep. 2)]

The intro was long and had annoying music. Once the episode started, it was a blast! :D

shineon responds:

aww, come on, you don't like the heartwarming sounds of christian children singing off-key? :) thanks for the review!

[SKY PIGS 2 animation test]

It's broken. The intro happens, but no episode follows. Please don't submit tests or unfinished items.

Cameron-Ohara responds:

Ah, thank-you! Sorry - I'll keep that in mind next time

[Don't Be So Serious]

Hi, and welcome to Newgrounds! :) You must be new around here. Now, you do know that Newgrounds is a site for animation and games, right? Yeah, there's a reason that the other things you see on here are drawn.

The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games.

Newgrounds is a site for animation. There may be a few videos here and there that go against that but generally all videos on the site are some sort of animation. If it's not already, then I suggest you upload this to sites like Youtube or Vimeo and see how you do there, but Newgrounds tends to prefer animated material. :)

jack55producer responds:

Hi, yes, I'm new to the site, i didn't realise it is animations only, it was suggested by a friend who clearly didn't know what he was talking about! Would you advise i remove it to not offend people or will it likely disappear with low scores anyway?

[The Last Man Alive]

Good voice acting. Unfortunately, slideshows are not allowed. PLEASE submit some animation, because you've got a great voice for it.

BadBagPiper responds:

Thank you so much for the input! I wish I had the talent to draw but I will look into ways of partnering up with some animators. Feel free to toss my name out there to anyone you know that could use some free voices.
Thank you again for your help!

[Toilet Tips]

Haw! I will admit, I have done this. It is good advice. x) I fold it over a few times so it's just wet enough to stick, but not 'yucky' and I stick it right to the sensor window. xD I suppose you could pull like 6 squares or so and wrap the sensor box a few times and avoid wetting anything. :)

Glugglor responds:

That is an interesting alternative to this tip. Thanks for sharing!