I wish it was finished. There's not enough to it yet. Scored 0 on this one, but you can expect better once you get it completed.
I wish it was finished. There's not enough to it yet. Scored 0 on this one, but you can expect better once you get it completed.
Yeah it definitely will be! I hope that I can finish it within December/January but it really depends because that's a faily busy time for me.
But no doubt I will finish it! But this is just the WIP. :333
This was good. What's with all the negative comments [from you]? If you can't be proud of your work, how will your viewers be? ;)
This touched my heart, thank you. But I really want to do better work. :/
And you chose to submit this version?
-You may not submit photography/video of naked people engaging in sexual activity.
-You may not submit photography/video images of excessive gore and/or "snuff."
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines
Sorry let me change that
The art could use help, tho, I do see some improvement. If you're going to continue with this, tho, please replace her whiny voice with a normal one. It's irritating. The story is ok so far. Although, having the dude change into a cat girl...wtf? Oh, and quit it with the different color eye thing. She looks better with blue.
Thank you for the criticism c: I'll make some tweaks. And Alli-chan (the orange hair kiddo) is genderfluid, or that's all how I intended them to be
Not bad. You should do more with it.
not bad... im a tgn partner and my videos get calificated , this one got 5 stars -awesome-
why people cant assume that if something is good it must be recognized, not bad... fuck that men.
You should call it "Family Fire Trailer." The current name makes no sense.
This video has a sense, it's my first try with ActionScript and I did want show the result in Newgrounds. Tomorrow is the really trailer of the Family Fire don't worry ;)
Это мило. Продолжать совершенствовать и создавать больше и лучше творения. :)
Обязательно!
Looks interesting, but there was too much echo in the voice. Combined with the accent, I couldn't understand what was being said.
Yeah I understand, I'm from Spain and I'm learn the language. Soon I will upload in Spanish, the quality of voice it's better.
It was a fun lil video. You should change your short description, as Newgrounds shuns live action, it can negatively affect your score, especially since it's all animated, and well done at that. :)
haha i should change that, i did it because it made me laugh. Thanks for the tip!
Your sound quality definitely needs help. Watch this one: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285 That's you in a nutshell.
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