Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[neet ep 66 FINE! iLL GET A JOB]

Why do you always make them so loud?

ZabuJard responds:

IT IS MY GIFT (BUT ALSO MY CURSE!!!!!!!!!!!! OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[D&D Animatic Episode 1.1]

With more animation and color, these could be good. However, there's barely any animation; it's almost a slideshow. And the absence of color makes it seem horribly incomplete. Please finish, tho. :)

TheCopperArmStudio responds:

Thanks for the constructive-criticism Exedor, My original intention for these shorts were to have colorful and more elaborate animation but due to college it gets hard to fit it all in when I have school work and such to focus on. Though future episodes will have color and more animation in them.

[Chibi Intro]

It was very cute. It was only an intro, tho, and an intro without anything behind it, y'know, like an episode of something, are kinda pointless. So, I guess, this was cute and pointless. :) Please bring us an episode! :)

creativeblackmind responds:

Thanks for your feedback. Still learning tho! Will try my best to make a complete episode :)

[A Message for my Girlfriend.]

Because she's a higher class girl than you deserve, bro. :)

spidee responds:

Damn :/ Wanna help a brother out?

[Barbi the Barbarienne movements]

Please don't submit tests or unfinished items to the Portal. That's not what it's for. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>"Jump to Forum"). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

misterprickly responds:

Thank you for your input.