Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[mw3 sniper montage]

Newgrounds is for animations and games that you have created. Gameplay footage doesn't count, and is actually against the rules.

thegameperson responds:

oh i didnt know

[Samurai motion test]

Looks like you're getting the hang of it. This hints at great things from you in the future. For now, tho, it's nowhere near ready to be put up.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

SirKnightTheHero responds:

yep, didnt know about that. (first time using NG)

is there a way to move this after being posted?

[Watch Me Draw: HD Survives Cupcakes]

While speed draws are allowed, this is very slow and waaaay too long. I'd suggest making it into a speed paint; your screen capture software should have that option. But as for this, I can't get behind it. It's just way too long and drawn out, and I'm not sure it even qualifies as acceptable Newgrounds material.

One author who does a lot of speed-paints is mysticskillz: http://mysticskillz.newgrounds.com/movies/

If you'd like to see some speed draws in action, watch some that he's put up. Also, hang out on Newgrounds a while and learn what we do here. that way, you'll have a better idea of how we do things, and what will go over well. :)

TwiDash-FTW responds:

I know how to do speedpaints, but this was something very special. I would've sped up me drawing the black outline but my editing program doesn't allow that so I was stuck with this. I know it is slow, but I wanted people to see HOW I draw these things without it being so fast and I wanted to explain. Sometimes I did get distracted but It's still acceptable knowledge for some people. I appriciate your concerns, but I think I'm good right now.

[Gujit Madness (Prev)]

A Madness preview!

...does Madness need previews?

Djjaner responds:

yes, indeed!

[PIKABITCH FIGHTSCENE ANIMATIC]

What you have hints at something decent in the future, but for now, this is nowhere near ready to be put up.

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

LordLeovuld responds:

Thanks man. I'm quite new to all this forum business. I will take your criticism to heart. I'm trying to get a collab going and this is not the only ongoing project right now. Thanks again for taking your time to write me.^^

[Mark SE1 EP3 The new kid]

Don't yell into the microphone.

Poosac responds:

Thnx for your helpful review .__.

[Spiderman Sprite Test]

This is nowhere near ready to be put up. This is 15 seconds, and that's not nearly finished.

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

AnimeBoss responds:

So that's what the dumping grounds is for :T anyway thanks for the feedback. I'll try not to make this an unimpressive site =w=.

[Silly shorts]

You are the second person I've ever seen that failed to spell their own name correctly.

The video was dull, noisy, poorly done, not really funny, non-animated, and generally, not Newgrounds material.

Sorry. :\

duffosaur responds:

thanks for letting me know, Ive since changed it now

[Game Animation Cycles]

Edit: The character animations aren't bad. I suppose that if it's going to get blammed, it's just that it's a "test" and not a story. I'll admit, I agree with the 'no tests in the Portal' sentiment, tho. It loks good, but without a story, it's kinda pointless. :\

My feedback and opinion. Hope it helps, I guess. :)

ShadyDingo responds:

No it makes perfect sense. I should be sharing animations that are story driven and have entertainment value. This isn't a place for portfolio sharing. This belongs more somewhere like Youtube and Vimeo ;)

[the art of mark 45xxx]

Now, you can post your art in the Art Portal, but the animation portal ("Movies") is for animations and games. Slideshows are actually against the rules.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

mark45xxx responds:

okay thanks.