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[Rainbow Freddy DEMO1.1]

Much better. :)

Roksi responds:

Thanks a lot!

[AGNIKAI!]

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

Diosel responds:

thanks!!!

[Office Dash 2.0]

The first platform HAS to be a normal platform. If I take too long getting from the mouse to the arrow keys, the platform will disappear before I can run to the end and get to the next platform. It also doesn't reset with the game, so when you fall and restart, the platform is already half gone. Since the controls are key-based, not mouse based, consider using the space bar to start/restart the game, so all hands can be at the ready when it starts.

cs90 responds:

Thanks for your feedback. In testing I was using W,A,S,D to move so my left hand was ready to move and my right hand was on the mouse, but I'll have a look at having some kind of delay when the level resets to give the player time to ready themselves with the controls. Did you mean the very first platform in the game or the first platform of each level? If it's just the very first one then I will just extend the time it takes for that particular platform to explode.

As for not resetting, I can't seem recreate that problem. Everything except the 'lives' & 'time' should reset when you fall. Which level was it happening on?

Thanks