Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[One Hit Hell]

I can't shoot...? Well, that kinda makes it pointless. :\

[Ball colecting thingy]

Isn't this a Unity template or tutorial?

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has already been submitted many times already, tho. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Also, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[The Corridor]

The maze isn't even beatable?

The flashing of the lights is annoying. An occasional flickering light is cool, but all of them flashing at the same time is annoying.

If the game is not finished, please do not submit it! This isn't the place for tests.

PhiloHick responds:

Hey exedor, It is only a quick demo and I presumed u could place demos here, I will upload the finished game next week. sorry for any inconvenience :)

[Alien Warfare]

Isn't this a Construct template or tutorial?

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has actually been submitted many times already. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Also, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

GaBeast responds:

Thanks for the awesome feedback. Sorry haha just a 15 year old guy messing around ill take this down as soon as possible.

[J.S.E The Platformer 2]

There's no way I can have my hands on the arrows, the space bar, and the mouse at the same time. You should use the up arrow for jump and use the space bar for shooting. The mouse isn't working for anything anyway, so I can't shoot. This game is terribly unfinished. please finish your game before submitting it to Newgrounds.

Dapa5678 responds:

read the controls before reviewing thanks

[UnityDoomThingyTest]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. It's for finished items only.

[Boy.]

Not too bad. You should have it say "There were no more coins! The End" after a while of walking around in the black so people know it's not broken and that the 'horror' is that there were no more coins. :)

[Gracillis V]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal.

FuckenGamer responds:

Ok i just wanna try if my game works but it dosent... Sorry :'(

[Endless Zombie Shooter]

Isn't this a Unity template or tutorial?

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

With that being said, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Universe]

The game's ok, but...

-How am I supposed to deal with the aliens when I can't shoot and can't outrun them?

-I need to be able to buy fuel from the space station. By the time I extract elements from the nearby planet, the aliens find me. The resources regenerate too slowly for it to be an effective refueling station.

-Faster repair would be nice, especially when you're at full throttle heading back to the space station to try to get the aliens off your tail.

This game definitely has potential, tho.