Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Enginer: Dev. Build]

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Balls To The Walls 2]

There are too many ads. The levels are only 30 seconds long, and there is an ad after every level, whether you beat it or not. This game is designed simply to play an abundance of ads, which is against the rules.

"Your submission must not be shovelware made to serve ads..."

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

[dodge]

If the goal of the game is to get the highest time, you need to add a game over screen that shows the time.

coolness444 responds:

I am still working on it so that was what I was planning on doing latter but thanks for the review

[McFizzels Earth Defense]

Your games must NOT redirect to another site or open up popup windows. Your game violates the rules of submission and will be removed.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

[Santa Troll 2.0]

Very hard. Not fun. Sometimes... many times, I cannot tell why I died.

[Slots Of Terror: Mini]

This should not open anything in a new window. It's against the rules.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

"Your submission must not auto-redirect to a new site or open pop-ups."

[SIC]

This is nowhere near ready to be put up. It looks decent, but there's not much to do, and when you move around, you click off-screen and it stops you. Then, you have a heck of a time trying to get it to work right again.

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[BBB: Halilintar vs Taufan]

Permainan ini tidak menyeronokkan. Bagaimana saya tahu bagaimana saya meneruskan apabila dia ????. Anda perlu menggunakan bahasa Malaysia supaya kita faham bahawa yang dikatakan. Saya menggunakan "google translate" untuk mentafsirkan ini.

This game is not fun. How do I know how well I am proceeding when he has ????. You need to use English so we understand that is said. I used "google translate" to decipher this.

[Laser Boy]

Good music and visuals, but the gameplay still needs some work.

- The character needs to be more centered in the screen, and maybe zoomed out a bit. There were many times when I died because I couldn't see where I was going to land, or where to go, because the next platform was out of view offscreen.

- For a guy with jetboots, he sure doesn't jump very high.

- It needs a reset button, possibly in a pause menu. There's a platform that you shoot, immediately after getting the gun mod. I shot the platform and it fell but when I jumped over the box, I landed between the box and the platform. The platform slid across the gap, and it was far enough that I couldn't make the jump. Every time I died, I started again at the same place and had to reload the game to continue.

It's looking great. Some fine tuning and it will be great.

[Tiger Storm]

This is nowhere near ready to be put up. It looks more like a development test than even a test demo.

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)