Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Monsters time (Zombies)]

They keep popping in right on top of me! D: I started a game and the very first zombie was right on top of me, so I was damaged before I even fired a single shot of the game. Also, the hit boxes for the zombies are big so I get damaged before they touch me. Also, add a game over screen WITHOUT the high score list! The high score list is right where I'm clicking feverishly in the game, and the list is clickable, so when my game ends, I automatically click on something. EVERY single time I've played, I've had to deal with some new popup because I clicked on something in the high score list.

dridiyassine responds:

Im sorry about that :( , but its the Demo version , it is just a test, im making the full one

[First Game Shooter]

Isn't this a Unity template or tutorial?

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this at all.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

With that being said, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Boulder Man 3]

Please stop submitting so many versions of the same, unfinished game.

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Island Survival ALPHA V.0]

This is nowhere near ready to be put up. As you said, there's nothing in it yet. You need to adjust your gravity/angle settings, as I got stopped by small hills that it decided were too steep for me to climb. Basically, all you have is ground, straight as it comes out of the Unity template, but with hills added, and that's not enough.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[beta bears in space]

Actually, what you have hints at good stuff in the future. For now, tho, it's too basic. There are no instructions. I'd suggest that you pick either mouse or keyboard controls, tho. It's weird to use the mouse for shooting and the keys for movement.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[The Begining]

Actually you cannot use Mario sprites in games. They're copyrighted Nintendo property, and they DO contact us about it and demand removal.

On another note, don't use Shift! It's a system key. I fail to see why people use it when there are so many general keys available.

[FlappyBirdSandBox2Player]

Please do not submit unfinished items to the Portal. Also, Flappy Bird clones are listed as shovelware and are removed by moderators.

[Rainbow Freddy DEMO1.1]

Much better. :)

Roksi responds:

Thanks a lot!

[Pepperoni Pizza]

Why would I dream about Munchiegames? They have sucky games, just like this one.

Seriously! There's no point to this game. You load everything up and ... there's no end. There's no point. There's no fun in this game.

People who love pepperoni will not love this game.

[Flappy Football]

Please do not resubmit things that have been blammed by the Newgrounds community.