Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Driving Simulator for Phyard]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This is not a game, and it's nowhere near ready to be put up. :\

[Flappy Bird]

This a Cyberix template, isn't it?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You didn't add much to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what templates do. This game has already been submitted MANY times already, tho, and since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Bad Dreams]

Isn't this a Unity tutorial? Or a template?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what templates do. This game has already been submitted MANY times already, tho, and since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

mlagogodoi responds:

i understand. sorry

[Choco-Break (First game)]

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This was bad, but it's not your fault, exactly. This was bad because it's Chocobreak. Chocobreak is broken, and always has been. The ball physics are screwed, and Clickteam never fixed them. And that suck, because given that it's a tutorial game, it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has already been submitted MANY times already, tho. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own. ..and, abandon Chocobreak.

Good luck. :)

[Happy Wheels]

If you didn't create it, don't submit it.

[Sketch Ball Fun Mobile Game]

Too many ads! One at the beginning is fine. One after every level is abusive.

[Noni's Epic Adventure]

Isn't this is a Stencyl tutorial or template?

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has already been submitted MANY times already, tho. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Save Rocky 1.0]

I like it, but there are too many green blocks before the store opens. :|

[Interactiv room?]

It's operable. Has some interesting bits to it. Keep going with flash and make some great things. :)

[Windows 95v]

A new emulation of a very old and overdone idea. Sorry.