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[TRACING ART - MAUU WIP]

What you have is pretty good, but there's not enough to it. It's still incomplete.

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-i nformation/content-submission

Good luck!

tulextreme responds:

Thank you dear friend! I`ll move it to the right section them! All the best!

[Lm:2 Weegee's Manshaun?]

The credits are 60% of the submission.

brittyxkitty responds:

Sorry about that. Just wanted to make sure everyone on set got proper credit and recognition.

[Mucul and Flexibility]

Muscles and flexibility... muscles move the body, and flexibility is how the body moves... and yet there was NO movement in this animation. That doesn't make a lot of sense.

Your spelling needs a workout, as it's pretty weak.

Your knowledge of anatomy is on par with your spelling and pronunciation.

"Quadropecs" ...? Did you mean 'Quadriceps?' Quad-ri-ceps

"Trapezus"? Trapezius ...you spelled it right. It's correctly diagrammed too. Trap-ease-ee-us

"Latissimus Dorsi" Wrong. They're not in the middle back, they're at the sides, and are sometimes referred to as 'wings.' Lattice-sim-us Door-si (psi/pie/cry/die)

"Petroalis" These are the large muscles of the chest, called 'Pecs' for short, and are pronounced: Peck-tor-al-is. They do not go above the collar bone, as your drawing suggests.

Deltoids. That red you drew is actually not muscle, it's your collar bones. Deltoids are the whole "ball" of muscles (front, side, rear) where the arm attaches to the shoulder.

"Gastronemis" You slaughtered that pronunciation. Gastrocnemius = Gassed-rock-knee-me-us. You drew it correctly.

Tendons connect muscle to bone.

Ligaments do NOT hold things together like a glue. They connect bone to bone.

Bloody awful. Please pay more attention to your studies and less attention to your priapism.

Google it, Sparky.

xlZancolx responds:

Listing things is a good way of making some one mad, insults along not-so-helpful "corrections" is a really good way to make me mad. Encase you didn't notice half the claims that you've stated is taking what I said and specifying them. If you want to look like a smart tough guy for all your little buddies on this site then do it somewhere else. I'm right, I know what's in the damn animation, and I am for one not proclaiming this to be a Vincent-Fucking-Van Gogh. One last thing to clarify for your "Bloody" ass is that I got a perfect grade for this, it's not to be pretty or perfect, it just get's the job done. If you failed to notice that then it really shows a lot about your character, "Sparky." So you can go bite the big one because I don't need to read any constructive criticism that doesn't even help me. You punk ass bitch.