I liked the music until about half way thru when it faded away and became just ambient noise. The video was also ok at the beginning, though it didn't seem to make much sense, other than ambient space filling for the video while the music played.
Now, you do know that Newgrounds is for animation and games, right?
The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games. That's always been the core and the spirit of Newgrounds.
This is video, and so this is better suited for youtube. :\