Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Prueba de Animacion Flash]

Um...what? ..er, I mean...

Um...que?

MrAlexborss responds:

Estoy practicando para luego hacer animaciones....

[Serenity - Ice Rain]

There's more regular photography here than time-lapse. At least time lapse has some interest to it, but regular doesn't. Some of the scenes were in cool, beautiful, or interesting places, but many of the scenes were in normal, not so interesting places. Albatross was all time-lapse, and it was ok, but unfortunately, this fell flat. :\ Sorry.

Gerkinman responds:

Thats cool man, I feel what your saying.

[Harry Potter Skit]

Why do people think that making their characters super-ugly in parts of their animations will help their score at all?

I liked this, but I didn't like the ugly-face parts. I don't know of anyone who finds that to add anything, but I know people who say it hurts the score, and it did in this case. Good animation, except for those parts. Just something to consider for the future.

Edwardio responds:

Thanks! Well I didn't create the animation to put on NG, so the faces aren't to try and help my score. But consider your constructive criticism acknowledged :)

[Walking Animation Test]

When people walk, one foot stays planted, which is what moves them. His body continues to move when the foot should be stationary.

But please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck, bud. :)

SahuaroProductions responds:

Thanks a lot! i'll keep that in mind.

[What Is Love Geddan]

Start>Programs>MikuMikuDance>Uninstal l>Yes>Yes>Finish.

Ebay>Search>Flash MX, Flash CS2/3/4/5

GJYYNGII responds:

Uhh... What's that for? O_o

[Flow: The Beauty of Ink]

Oh, yeah. You have my permission to submit more like this.

Alldin responds:

There will be more than this =)

[SATURATE]

Another Daily 1st. Can you handle it? Well, I predict Front Page too.

46 views at the moment, but that's my prediction. :)

Alucard responds:

Not one or another my bro
Sadly I'm just an underdog

[Youtube in a nutshell]

Y'know what? I actually like your work. :)

brynimation responds:

Thank you my friend. That means a freakin' lot to me. You're awesome matey!

[Trick this Treat]

"Your submission must not simply be an ad for your site."

Your submissions comes pretty close to breaking this rule, there, Ms. Zombie. Please add a bit more to the content side with your next submission, ok?

ZiaZombie responds:

Oi... Seems like an ad? NOOOO it's a song! I'm guessing all that stuff at the end and the length of it give it that feel.

Hmmm.. What if I told you I've got my little animators and designers busy working on the first episode to my interesting tale? Once done, it'll be uploaded to here. 15-30 minutes or so. This is actually a piece of that story!

Cheers! (-;

- Zia

[The Window]

Please don't submit pieces.

This is very nice. I really like it, and yet it's a nice picture, but it's a pointless animation. You could submit it (the pic) to the Art Portal and it'd do well. But as far as being in the animation Portal, it's really lacking anything it needs in order to be here. Even if it had music, an occasional bird chip or fly-by, rain, deer walking thru, SOMETHING else to it, then it'd make a nice screen-saver-like relaxing piece.

See "MLP Rarity bath time" in my favorites or cut & paste this: http://www.newgroun ds.com/portal/view/582959 (remove the space).

It's a picture for the most part, until you realize that there are things going on all over the place. When combined with the relaxing music, you get a wonderful relaxing piece.

This sweet picture has the beginnings of something cool and relaxing like that, but for now, it's just a picture, and this isn't the Art Portal. It's the animation Portal, and this really doesn't have any.

SunshineAnBlackSheep responds:

Alrighty, thank you for your feed back, I'll remember your advice next time when submitting, which will hopefully be the full animation in a few weeks, anyway.