Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SPUD - Part 2]

Worth the wait!

Well done, Jonathan! Another great one.

But how can I dislike the 'evil' chicks when they're so darn cute?! :)

Can't wait til Spud 3!

nahtanojmal responds:

:D THANKS!

[Regeneration.]

The Tardis doesn't fall.

It materializes. Neg points for not using the Tardis sound. Neg points for not using the Dr Who music. (Tom Baker FTW!)

While he was standing there with the sillouettes in the background, I realized something...

Robclock sure is shaped oddly like Strawberryclock.

RobertClock responds:

Series 5, Episode 1- The Eleventh Hour: The TARDIS falls from the sky.

The music cue used is from 'Every Planet, Every Star', and it is in fact Doctor Who music. http://bit.ly/o5zfWg

and your opinion on the shape relation of a human head to a strawberry is entirely inconsequential.

[tetris roar]

It works.

It has choppy animation, but that's expected, and not a big problem. It has no music, but the assignment didn't necessarily require music, so that's understandable. It had no story or plot, really, but didn't require any. For homework, this was not bad. -for homework. As homework, it was good, so I gave you 1 gold star. As a Newgrounds flasah, well...

Newgrounds requires more. So basically, we have a flash that's 4 seconds long, with choppy animation, no sound or music, and no story or plot. Hmmm... So when I put it like that, maybe you can understand why I say I had to give this one a 0/5. It's short, pointless, and has all that you needed for homework, but none of the things that it needs to stay on Newgrounds. Sorry.

Please dont submit pointless items to Newgrounds.

greensparrow21 responds:

lol i agree it's definitely pointless i just thought i'd give it a shot in submitting it. it's not my first time submitting something on here, but it is the first time it passed the initial voting stage so i'm taking that as an accomplishment and using the vibe to fuel my next project. thanks for the honest review by the way, and i hope to have your input on my next animation :)

[LunaRose 1-7]

Is this going anywhere?

So in 7 episodes, all they've managed to get done is meet each other, meet some other people, go to town, and arrive at the amusement park. Please speed it up. All they do is talk for most of each episode.

My thoughts so far:

1. The biggest draw to this is the sexy way you drew the women. At least we can look at them as we're waiting for SOMETHING to happen.
2. The pace is way too slow. Please speed it up and have them actually DO SOMETHING.
3. Please change the 'doorbell' sound as you hit the buttons in the beginning!!
4. Watch the volume. The background music is often loud enough that it makes the people hard to follow.

I used to say "Oh great! Another one!" but now it's "Oh great, what now." :\

Crintleod responds:

I would like to change the doorbell sound, but it's just so much of a hassle. I will probably do it sometime soon.

I will turn down the music also.

I am uhm... sorry about the very slow pace. I suppose I did make the conversations go a bit too long...

Sorry to say, but most of this episode is talking since it is the character's vacation and the episode is 14 chapters long so yeah. But due to your comments, I will definitely make the next episode much more action packed.

Thanks for your constant feedback.

[A song about lag!]

Sorry.

I get the point, and the joke, but there's a difference between joking slowly and wasting my time, and this was wasting my time. The load bar went too slow. The blue screen was supposed to be the "oh, so close, but noooooo" moment, but by the time it got there it was too late for it to be funny. Was there ever a song? I shut it off. When the blue screen came up, you should put in the "Fail sound" from the Price Is Right. You can find it on the internet. That would've been funy. I heard no song or sound, so I shut it off cuz I was bored. Sorry.

snowbodys responds:

The point of it is a song that wont load. -.- so plz learn to take a joke

[Amphibians From Outer Spa]

Hey, Newgrounds is for animation.

This isn't bad, but Newgrounds is for animation. Youtube is for videos. :)

GuerrilleroHeroico responds:

Heh- I don't think that it's explicitely against the rules, but I understand. This was really just for fun and it's Clock Day.

[What is this Clock thing?]

Close.

From what I can tell, it started as a day where the clock crew wanted to submit as many clock-themed flashes as they could. Eventually, there were so many flashes coming in that you couldn't keep up with them all, so people started just voting without watching them so as to get their Protection points.

For those of you who don't understand about Blam and Protection points: When an item is new (called 'under judgement') it can be either protected or blammed (deleted cuz it sux). Votes of 2 - 5 count toward saving a flash. Votes of 0 - 1 count toward blamming a flash. I never use 1, cuz if I don't like it, I want it gone, so why give even a 1, y'know? I seldom give 5 either. I consider 5 for only the best works. Anyway, you get points if you vote correctly- voting in the good flashes and voting down the bad ones. If you vote to blam something, but it passes, you get no points. Same if you vote to keep something, but it gets blammed- no points. Higher points lead to higher ranks and voting power. And that's the problem with Clock Day.

With so many flashes coming thru, people couldn't keep up with them, so they started just voting everything in before watching it so they could get their points. Since people weren't watching the items, they started to vote in crappy stuff without knowing it. The nail in the coffin came when "Strawberry Clock" decided to see just how bad this 'vote without watching' thing was. He decided to submit a flash that was nothing more than a red B on a white background. Sure enough, it passed, and thus, you now have the legend of B and Strawberry Clock.

As for this flash, the words went by fast enough that they were hard to read. It'll pass, though. People have been voting 5 on most everything all day long. I voted 2's and 0's all day mostly, unless something was particularly good. Yes, I watched most everything. My eyes hurt! :\

;)

IceDragon64 responds:

Oh, dear. Such a lot of effort and so completely wrong! Where do you think you get your facts from? Everything you said about B/P is correct, but everything you said about the origins of SBC and the CC is completely round the wrong way!
If you don't believe me, or Wikigrounds, try reading the info on the Clock Crew collection, or do you not believe Newgrounds either?

An author submitted a load of crap under his alias, StrawberryClock. B was his third attempt to get a flash through judgment without any animation. As it mysteriously got through judgment with UNDER the blam threshold and got Totw, it was seen on the front page. A fan of SBC called himself OrangeClock and started the Clock Crew on the BBS. It all goes from there. Clock day came a year later and is otherwise everything you said it is.
So, thanks, you ment well, but undermined the whole purpose of my Flash!

Well done for judging all our Flash, but that lot all about yourself is not really what reviews are for.