Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[For a friend]

It was cute, but needs a few more frames in places so the text doesn't go off before it can be read.

DankyTazz responds:

Aye thanks for mentioning that =3

[Jumping]

It's got a lot of area for improvement, but it's a nice start. It had a story, and it was fun. The sounds were good and comical. The artwork needs work, and I'd recommend adding a preloader so it doesn't loop.

TeamMetallicMusic responds:

That's the point. It should be like that. But thanks anyway! : )

[Update (Newgrounds Version)]

Bummer that the sound didn't work.

Don't make new, remake the old. Why have a useless, unused old account? Delete if necessary and post all new stuff. :)

MilhoYT responds:

Yeah, i dunno what happened. Thanks for the help accountwise, really helped! :)

[The Smithy]

Your work is really well done. These ...teasers really don't do it justice, tho. I can't wait to see a real animation from you! It should be fantastic! :)

AustinLabarbera responds:

Well thank you! I appreciate the feedback. I had to upgrade my machine just to render this, haha. I am working on a few scenes at the moment. Thanks for checking it out!