Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fan animation naruto 604]

As awesome as the art and animation are, this is way too short. People are going to think you borrowed and modified from the actual show. :\ Try to make it longer, or better yet, make the ful animation before submitting it. No one likes part of a story, no matter how cool it looks.

frass70 responds:

thank you this comment alone has restored my faith in animating but the anime hasnt gotten this far yet

[Green's Quest]

This is a loop.

Loops go in circles.

Circles are round.

I gave you a round score. :)

[Galaxy PoliceSquad 3]

Yay! Iz been waitin' for this! :D

[Incident in the Alley]

That was awesome! Quite the inventive story! :D

myoneandonly responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[astro-shark]

Actually, it wasn't bad. I doubt, you'll win any awards for it, but I know you're not surprised by that comment. I liked the colors of the galaxy you drew better than the one I drew. I've got tips and tutorials in my most recent news post that maybe might be helpful. Keep improving. You're off to a good start already. :)

Mythical-Monkey responds:

thanks for the coment

[Hachiko running cycle]

What you have is good, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)