Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Worms]

One thing I try to get across to noobs is: It doesn't ahve to be perfect, but at least make it complete, and put some effort into it."

You did that! This was really great. If all first flashes were like this, Newgrounds would be awesome again!

Decently drawn. Animated well. Great story. Very entertaining.

Well done. You can be proud. :)

[Gamer - Shaping Staff]

Wow! That was quite cool!

[Blossomforth Winks]

What you have is good. There's just not enough to it. It needs a story, characters, music, and magical twinkly sparkles before it can be considered complete.

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

....ponies! Woot! (B

RazorSharpFang responds:

Oh! I see. Man, I really wish NG has told me this stuff... I even read the terms and conditions too, but this entire thing is leaving me confuzled. :/ And not because I lack English skills either; I understand the terms and conditions, but I feel that NG assumes you know what you're doing with the interface, and all these ERROR 502 errors aren't helping :/

Thanks for the tip.

[MTV SUCKS!]

Yup. That's about it. :)

[Onirotelepath]

Wow! The only way this could get better is to add the english subtitles into the animation so we don't have to take our eyes off the animation to scroll down and read them. :)

[Slice of #1]

The beginning was boring. Once the girl showed up and some real animation and movement started, then it had some interest. The problem was that there isn't much that's interesting here. This isn't a story. It's an explanation. That's like someone reading you the instruction booklet from a set of shelves.

"This is Pi. First, she opens the box and gathers her tools. Next, she lays out boards A and F. Then, carefully hammering the nail, she installs shelves B, C, D..." See? Just not all that interesting.

Actually, this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

[Cosmic Voyage]

Huge file! Takes forever to load. Once it does, however, that was great! Glad you finished it.

This comment was more to help with people who say it's taking too long. I left this in one window while I did other things in another until the music started.

[The Forgotten]

Yes, it was rough. The story, however, made up for it. Touching.

I've got tips and tutorials in my news post that might be helpful. Keep improving, and I look forward to seeing good stuff from you! :)

Dreader6 responds:

thanks mate. i hope to continue doing this. at the moment im doing it on my schools laptop. my computer cant do really much of anything so if i ever get a new one i'd do more that are more polished.