Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aint No Rest For the Demo]

The story's ok. The timing needs work, tho. Either increase the number of pictures you take and poses you use or lower the framerate. If you add more pics/poses, you'll give more screen time to the movements, and make them more fluid. If you cut your framerate so things don't go so fast, it would give more screen time to the movements, but lowering the framerate without changing the pictures would make it choppier.

JackKSchroeder responds:

Thanks for the advice. I really appreciate it! I will work harder on the next one to make things more fluid.

[Backyard Walrus]

What you have is ok, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless to submit.

Being new at flash is fine. We all start there. Go to my most recent news post for tips and tutorials that might be helpful.

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

zenzen1997 responds:

ok, im sorry for uploading it in the portal. I will follow your advise and put it in the forums. thank you for your advise.

[Angry Little Koreans]

Juss fo dat, I nook yoo. xD

[Meteor Striker]

That was actually pretty good, considering it was all pencil. :)

ElectroJoe responds:

Charcoal :p but thanks for the review!