Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Harry]

Yay! That was great! :D

Lucendi responds:

Thank you so much!

[Lost Woods Irish Whistle]

Hi, and welcome to Newgrounds.

Now, you do know that Newgrounds is for animation and games, right?

The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games.

This is video, and so this is better suited for youtube. :\

[Aint No Rest For the Demo]

The story's ok. The timing needs work, tho. Either increase the number of pictures you take and poses you use or lower the framerate. If you add more pics/poses, you'll give more screen time to the movements, and make them more fluid. If you cut your framerate so things don't go so fast, it would give more screen time to the movements, but lowering the framerate without changing the pictures would make it choppier.

JackKSchroeder responds:

Thanks for the advice. I really appreciate it! I will work harder on the next one to make things more fluid.

[sonic girls ipods]

This is really nothing but a slideshow. There's really no animation here at all. Please animate something great. We'd love to see it. But as for this, it kinda goes against what Newgrounds is about, and also the rules on the submit page:

"Do not submit pictures in a slide show format with no interactivity."

"Do not submit copyrighted video clips or photographs that you did not create."

[loop test]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

[Backyard Walrus]

What you have is ok, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless to submit.

Being new at flash is fine. We all start there. Go to my most recent news post for tips and tutorials that might be helpful.

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

zenzen1997 responds:

ok, im sorry for uploading it in the portal. I will follow your advise and put it in the forums. thank you for your advise.

[Angry Little Koreans]

Juss fo dat, I nook yoo. xD

[Metaphors]

Newgrounds is for animations and games. This is better suited for youtube. :\

goochmaster15 responds:

There's plenty of live action videos on here. It's not JUST for animation and games.

[My Intro]

That was really good. It was interesting, entertaining, and not long and drawn out like some are. With that being said, it's still more of a part than a movie.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

[Initial Point: Eternity]

I liked the music until about half way thru when it faded away and became just ambient noise. The video was also ok at the beginning, though it didn't seem to make much sense, other than ambient space filling for the video while the music played.

Now, you do know that Newgrounds is for animation and games, right?

The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games. That's always been the core and the spirit of Newgrounds.

This is video, and so this is better suited for youtube. :\

Nadrient00 responds:

Thank you for viewing and taking the time to comment; in the end we are just a community of creators :)