Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hachiko running cycle]

What you have is good, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

[Tigris Mythos - Clip 1]

What you have is good, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless. Is there more to it? It a test?

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :

[Game trailer]

What you have is ok, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless.

First off, putting too many movie clips on the screen makes for major lag, so be sure to keep that in mind. Second, it was kinda slow moving, and then it was done. :\

Being new at flash is fine. We all start there. Go to my most recent news post for tips and tutorials that might be helpful.

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

abe3002 responds:

Thank you for the feedback and I'm sorry that it was on here but thanks for kind response :)

[TWE The world ends Menu]

What you have is good, but there's not enough to it.

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

Lockengine responds:

Thanks for the advice i haven't been on here for sometime and with the site changing i haven't had chance to scour through and go through the correct lines. Thanks for the help.

[Sonic Unleashed 2 [W.I.P]]

What you have is good, but there's not enough to it. You're reasonably close to having it ..maybe half-way done (?), which makes it kinda pointless to submit it now.

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

[200 cosas que no sabias 4]

This is pointless, and it's hard to understand. :\

junbo66 responds:

do not worry I put subtitle in English to better understand

[Light of NG]

For a commercial about an animation site, this has far less animation than one would expect. :\

[Intro For TV Spot]

What you have is good. It seems like it should work for your program on TV. The quality is good.

This may not be the best place for this, tho. Once this passes, it'll quickly fall from the actively viewed section. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, or respond much easier than outside email, and hopefully you can find what you want. There are threads set up for just this purpose in the forums.

Good luck! :)

[Mega Sonic Bros. AF Eps 1]

Yay. We need a new Mario-Mega-Sonic-X-Super-Zero sprite series here on Newgrounds. Please add some Dragonball Z effects and some high energy music with japanese lyrics just to be sure it's unique.

[MY Movies]

What you have is good, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless.

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)