Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Forgotten]

Yes, it was rough. The story, however, made up for it. Touching.

I've got tips and tutorials in my news post that might be helpful. Keep improving, and I look forward to seeing good stuff from you! :)

Dreader6 responds:

thanks mate. i hope to continue doing this. at the moment im doing it on my schools laptop. my computer cant do really much of anything so if i ever get a new one i'd do more that are more polished.

[The Bombly Bimbly - Intro]

What you have is good, but there's not enough to it yet.

But, this isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

Also, go to my most recent news post for tutorials and other tips that may be helpful. :)

KoalaPhoenix responds:

Thank you so much for your helpful feedback! I'm fairly new to Newgrounds and the animating scene in general. I was worried the first comment would be someone bluntly insulting me; thank you for taking the time to offer advice!

[GENERIC ANIME:EPISODE 2..]

This was much better than the first one. The humor is still on the edge of being genuinely funny; sometimes inside, but sometimes outside that edge. Sometimes, the 'yelling' voiced lines were such that they were hard to understand. Still a slight improvement over the original, though.

thebreadandbutter responds:

thank you :) It means alot to me that someone acually cares to point out the flaws of the animation.

[My first Animation]

All you did was cut pics out of various videos and run them thru photoshop filters to change the look, just like your "artwork." While I like the music, and this is kinda cool, I'd much rather see you do some real animation and stop it with these noob tricks.

Please animate something of your own.

Belthagor responds:

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/belthagor/more-miscellaneous-artwork

if only I could animate this well....

by the way almost all of my artwork is drawn, please dont knock on it.

[This is only the start]

What you have is good, but there's not enough to it.

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

Also, go to my most recent news post for tutorials and other tips that may help. :)

[Nyan cat]

This is ok. But this has been done many times already.

[HappyClockDay11F&S]

THIS is what happens when people vote 5 on Clock Day. Vote 2 and you'll still get your protection point. Or vote 0 like it deserves and stop turning Newgrounds to ...well, THIS.

[MEGAMAN HARLEM SHAKE]

The only thing I didn't like about this one was that you left the music going while they beat him. Otherwise, oh yeah. :)

rozhvector responds:

thanks for the review

[funny sc gameplay]

This isn't much of a game. It's also not much of an animation. It's just a screen capture of you poorly playing a game, and was not entertaining at all. :\

Please don't submit things that aren't animations to the Portal. Screen captured video does not count.

[Battle: FJ [test_01]]

This isn't much of a game. It's also not much of an animation. It's just a screen capture from RPG Maker. :\

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-i nformation/content-submission

Good luck! :)

GameVeloper responds:

Thanks!
We'll submit our vids to YouTube!