Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Extreme Tetris]

NEEDS a high score board! :)

sunnydk87 responds:

Lol! What score did you get? Do I need to make the next one harder? =P

[Atlantic Invaders (test)]

"the rules only ban "pointless" demos and this clearly has a point so ha ha ha"

Actually, nah, this is pointless. Sorry. There's just not enough of 'real' game content here. The idea is that you submit half or two thirds of a working game, so people can try it, but not have the whole thing if you don't want.

This does have some parts...
You can move, so the controls work.
The graphics are good.
It has sound. One sound.
It has an end.

But it's missing so much...
It has no levels.
It has no music.
It has no menu.
It has no start button.
It has no Replay? button.
It has no credits.
It has no princess to save.
It has no other castle for her to be in.
It has no castles at all.
It has no medals.
It has no high score list.
It has no scores.
It has no guns.
It has no fireballs.
It has no explosions.
It has no Hadouken!
It has no power ups.
It has no power pellets.
It has no ghosts.
It has no pac, though, it does have men.
It has no bonuses.
It has no trophies.
It has no DBZ, Sonic, Mario sound effects or characters. ...thanks!! :D
It has no cars, trucks, planes, or trains.
It has no obstacles to avoid.
It has no enemies to avoid.
It has no ponies to avoid.
It has no level select.
It has no girls in bikinis holding signs that say "Round 1" Don't forget the bikini girlz! D:
It has no zombies. ...unless those were zombie heads. In which case, they have no green.
It has no eggs.
It has no ham.
It has no poison.
It has no potions.
It has no hearts, life bars, or lives.
It has no 1ups.
It has no 'insert coin for credit.'
It has no coin slot, and so I think I've fawkd my CD drive slot.
It has no vampires.
It has no dragons.
It has no way to die.
It has no Game Over. Continue?
It has no bombs.
It has no arrows.
It has no arrows to the knee.
It has no knees.
It has no secrets.
It has no mystery. And most importantly...
It has no fun.
It has no points...

And that makes it pointless.

Yeah, it needs a lot.

Please don't submit things that aren't finished. It's a waste of everyone's time to do such things Who wants to play unfinished games, y'know?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

NG link: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

BillMcDonagh responds:

Thank you! I had no idea there was a Dumping Ground, I will definitely use that instead of the portal for things like this in future. I basically just wanted to upload the thing somewhere to show a couple of my friends, so that sounds ideal.

Should I delete this and reupload there, or? :\ I remember something in the rules about not deleting games that have been hit with a lot of low scores, but that might not apply since this game ("""game""") is literally in the wrong place. Ha ha how do I newgrounds.

But yes either way thank you! :)

[Time challenge]

Please don't submit things that come from a tutorial. Please don't submit things that aren't finished. It's a waste of everyone's time to do such things Who wants to play unfinished games, y'know?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

cass12 responds:

wow i didnt released that i will dlete iot and make it full and release it

[Shooting Game 2]

Could you not come up with a better name than "Shooting Game"? It doesn't really stand out.

LARRYBOY01 responds:

i will, but did the game work out okay?

[Inconic PReloaded]

Do not submit Stencyl tutorials.

Mugenify4389 responds:

not a tutorial

- but a remix idiot did you even pass world 1 yet

- you only saw the world 0

[Spin]

This game is fun! It would be nice to know how many games have been played so I know if it's cumulative, or how far I have to go to get that medal. It's annoying that the ads come up so much.

shadwstalkr responds:

That's a good idea, I added that to the game over screen. I also slowed down the ads, people are spending less time on each play than I expected.

[Bladed DEMO]

This is SO far down in quality from your other submissions! Why?!

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

Arg410 responds:

Im sorry, but the dumping grounds just isnt for me..... i just dont like it because you cant leave a description and cant have metals and gives people the permissions to download it, which i dont really want.

Second this isnt a "TEST" if it was, it wouldn't work. This game has working controls. And i can test this can MYSELF with out the need to post it. I posted it to show gamers the concept of the game, as well get them excited for the full version. and to show people what the full version has to offer.

I hope you understand.... Thanks for the comment tho....

[PIX (Menu Preview)]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

GadgetLtd responds:

Oh COMEON!

Its showing how it's gonna BE!

- Gadget

[Weave 0.4 Beta]

What you have looks good, but doesn't play well. First and foremost, this is one step outside of a straight tutorial end-result game. That's a violation of the rules in the terms of service on the submit page: "Do not submit movies or games made from public .FLA files (such as tutorials)." That's a common mistake that Stencyl users make. When you complete a Stencyl tutorial, you haven't made your own game, you've re-created someone else's game by following their instructions.

My own suggestions for this are mostly obvious:

-Reset gameplay automatically after death! It's a fundamental part of gameplay. Stencyl does have that capability, so check up on how to activate it.
-Sound & music can make the game. Without it, well...
- Be aware of the size of the hit box. If it's larger than the character, the player dies while still away from the enemy or a wall, and this is the case here. I died before I touched the wall.

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want. And tutorial end-games can be submitted there without fault, but the Portal is for finished items.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)

Danny24Pro responds:

Thank you for your advice. I would like to start by saying that this is built from scratch in Stencyl. Using open source art. I have been making games with python for a few years and apologise that my first go at a flash engine didn't work out. I will pull Wear now and submit the next release to the dumping grounds.

[Gulf Defence]

You sure that person is from a 'peace-loving' country in the middle east? I think you are ignorant of a few facts, there.

beplayed responds:

This is a satire of the modern world politics and wars. Did you take 'peace-loving' and 'peaceful nuke' seriously :)?