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[Pilo]

It was ok... til level 3.

Then the 'wind' kicked in. It was ok but not overly fun til that point. After the 'wind' started, it just wasn't fun anymore.

norfor22 responds:

nmm..the wind is only in this level :o

[Moar Chocobreak!!!!!!!!!!]

I found a glitch.

There's Chocobreak in your game. Really.

Your game is good. The problem is not your game, but the fact that it's Chocobreak. Chocobreak is broken. Chocobreak is flawed. The physics are screwed up. When you hit the ball at an "up angle" it should bounce and continue going up, which is the correct direction. Chocobreak doesn't do that. About half the time, it sends the ball off in some unnatural direction. Often, it'll be heading up, hit the side wall and bounce right back down at you. It's always been that way.

It's not your fault. Your game was good. I played a few levels, but I still ran into the ball bouncing in unnatural directions many times, often causing me to lose the ball. Don't feel bad. It's not your fault, and there's nothing you can do about it.

Games Factory either doesn't know or doesn't care enough to make a correction update. GF has done more to put dookie games into the Portal than any other. Even the Kitty Crew and Clock Crew shoud be jealous.

What you did with the game was good, but Chocobreak is poo. I hate seeing that little spinning fat kid. Thanks to GamesFactory, I firmly believe that the brown on that kid's face is not chocolate.

:)

metroidfannumber1 responds:

its the last one i swear. by the way, did you get to the part where you get an upgrade and he shoots a large beam of energy out of his umbrella thing and destroys all the blocks in your path? im most proud about that upgrade.

[Vortex Wars]

This was fun!

This was a great game. It needs a place where there are more instructions before you start, as opposed to the ones that are in game. you're trying to read instructions and still finish your turn as the clock ticks down. Still good though. :)

Lopdo responds:

There is much more detailed How to play screen describing all modes. Have you checked it out? Thanks for review :)

[Hank combat test]

Don't submit tests.

What you have is ok. There's just not hardly anything there! The movement is nicely fluid, and you have music, so that's good. But there're no enemies, no background, no score or weapons. There's not even a second screen!

This game is a fragment. It's a piece of what could eventually be turned into a game, but for now, it's nothing more than a part or a bit.

The problem is not if it's bad, but rather if it's good. When it's bad, it gets a low score and gets blammed and is forgotten and gone. Done.

If it's a 'good' piece, then people get confused and may pass it. The problem is that then we've got a fragment of a piece of a bit of a flash floating around newgrounds forever, and what's the point of that? That's not what Newgrounds is about.

What's here isn't bad. But if it passes, it'll be forever unfinished, because if you complete this into a game, you'll submit the finished item as a separate item and we'll have both finished and unfinished items floating around here.

It's not bad. Just, please send thru completed items.

[MegaManDEMO TGF2]

It works. I looks ok. But this isn't Demogrounds.

It's decent, but there's so much missing, that it's a real hard vote to allow it to stay on here. :\

This game is a fragment. It's a piece of what could eventually be turned into a game, but for now, it's nothing more than a part or a bit.

The problem is not if it's bad, but rather if it's good. When it's bad, it gets a low score and gets blammed and is forgotten and gone. Done.

If it's a 'good' piece, then people get confused and may pass it. The problem is that then we've got a fragment of a piece of a bit of a flash floating around newgrounds forever, and what's the point of that? That's not what Newgrounds is about.

This isn't bad. I fully expect this to pass, and thus, it'll be forever unfinished, because if you complete this into a flash, you'll submit the finished item as a separate item and we'll have both finished and unfinished items floating around here.

It's not bad. Just, please send thru completed items. :)

[That Falling Music Game]

This game COULD be a lot of fun...

However, the seizure effect, the pulsating words at the beginning, and the 'fuzzy' effect while playing were so overdone that it zapped your points in half. Fix or lessen that substantialy and maybe...

[K.O.L.M. 2]

Yay! More K.O.L.M.!! :D

This game is great! Just like the other 2. :)

If I have anything I'd recommend, I'd like it to be more noticeable when there's some update to the story. Often, I find that I'm so focused on the game part of the window that I miss any new story lines that show up until after they're in, and if there's no way to scroll back thru, then they're gone til I play again. :\

Otherwise, it's great!!! :D

[Avoid Them Balls!]

Please don't submit unfinished things.

It's decent, but there's so much missing, that it's a real hard vote to allow it to stay on here. :\

This game is a fragment. It's a piece of what could eventually be turned into a game, but for now, it's nothing more than a part or a bit.

The problem is not if it's bad, but rather if it's good. When it's bad, it gets a low score and gets blammed and is forgotten and gone. Done.

If it's a 'good' piece, then people get confused and may pass it. The problem is that then we've got a fragment of a piece of a bit of a flash floating around newgrounds forever, and what's the point of that? That's not what Newgrounds is about.

This isn't bad. I fully expect this to pass, and thus, it'll be forever unfinished, because if you complete this into a flash, you'll submit the finished item as a separate item and we'll have both finished and unfinished items floating around here.

It's not bad. Just, please send thru completed animations. :)

[laser blade]

That music is awful!

The picture is cool, but it's just a picture. When I click, it sends me to Youtube, and that's the LAST place I want to be sent. Where's the story? Does it advance anytime, or is this just a moving picture and nothing else? Except a Youtube link.

oladitan responds:

This happens to be a single page project. I may update this. thank you for the comment.

[Mistress BBQ]

Chores?

If I wanted to cut meat and peppers, I'd be in the kitchen. :(