Broken, but has potential.
It looks good, and sounds good, but nothing dies. I can't kill anything, and they can't kill me. The portal at the end seems to take you back to the beginning of the stage, so there's no advancing once you leave the cave.
It looks like it'll be good once it's done, but it's still unfinished and pointless cuz I can't kill the enemies, so: 0/5 and 3/10. All unfinished things get 0, because they're unfinished.
Come on, Newgrounds!!!
How can you pass something that doesn't even work?!
If it doesn't work and you blam it, he'll fix it and resubmit it so it can get an appropriate score. Now, it's stuck at a false score and it doesn't work!
Think before you vote!!
Dude. Delete this one if you can, and resubmit this once you fix it. If you just reupload the repaired file, you'll only be adjusting an already low score. If you resubmit as a new file, you can get this rated with an appropriate score for a working game.
Yes, the time thing sux.
The music is good. The bunny is sooo cute when he's eating the carrot!
There are a few things to change, though.
1. Instructions. It's a set of mini-games, from what I can tell, but you're dropped into a level with no heads up as to what to do, so by the time you've figured it out, you've lost valuable seconds. I lost level 1 because I thought you had to click on the carrot. I did. Once. Then, when nothing happened, I started clicking fast, but I'd lost enough time that I lost the level. On level 2, I never found the carrot. I always ran out of time, and having to replay the previous level over again, I shut it off after 3 or 4 tries without finding the carrot.
2. Replaying levels. If you lose, you have to replay the previous level. It's not so bad when you're on level 1 or 2, but once you get to the higher levels, going back to replay all the levels can get annoying. With no instructions, you're almost guaranteed to lose at least once with only 10 seconds to figure out the level and then win it. I played level 2 like 4 times, and without finding the carrot, I stopped playing cuz I didn't want to try level 1 over again.
The game is cute, but it needs more time, or instructions, or both. :)
That was hilarious!!!
Dude! We've got a nightclub here called "The Underground" and that looked eerily like my ex wife. I was so glad to see that you're in Chicago!
If I could make any suggestion, you have 2 options at the end; menu and retry from 'Judy'. I'd like to see a retry from the bar, so you can bypass the beginning bar scene without having to refresh or completely play thru if you're trying for the Pattern Recognition medal.
That was great. And scary. O_O
It was good for 3 levels.
Then, the targets came. You can't miss a single target, which I understand. But there are platforms in the way, which block your shots. If you're on the platforms, they can be as high as half the page, which cuts your response time in half, and you can't shoot down thru the platforms, so if you don't hit it by then, you're probably going to fail the level. Again. It'd be better if there were either less targets, or you needed 25/30.
The fastest gun is the pistol, but even with the cowboy upgrade, it still gets too aggravating after you played the same friggin level 24 times and still can't move on.
I'd upgraded the pistol to over level 14, but speed or fire rate is never increased, just power and bonus $. Remove the platforms and/or make the gun faster and/or allow shooting thru the platforms or the game is basically DOA after level 3 or 4.
I really appreciate the detailed feedback, Exedor. :) You're definitely not the only one stuck on the target-shooting level, so level patching is in order! I'll revisit the weapon upgrades as well and see what bits I can tweak.
Art. ...that is fundamentally broken.
This looks fantastic. The music is great and the sounds are good. I wish it was playable. :\
The animation isn't fluid. When jumping, you need fluid animation to tell how close to the holes you are so you know when to jump.
The clouds on the bottom go one direction while the clouds behind go the opposite direction. They should go with the wind so we know what direction it's going.
The jump mechanic is broken. With winds going either direction, I couldn't get over the holes. I tried a double jump, and got over 1 hole thru 2 play-throughs (20 deaths) and 3 holes thru 3 play-throughs (30 deaths total). The double jump needs to be more forgiving. The whole upper half of the arc should count, not just the tip top.
I'm bummed because it's such a beautiful game to see, but it is no fun to play.
Fail.
Looks good. Plays bad. Has no content.
The graphics look good, but there's too much on the screen. Zooming out helps. The ship can't turn on a dime. It has to make a complete circle if you pass something up, rather than just rotating 270* and going straight to where you want to go. And there's NO content here. You get a partial training mission, but then you're forced into battle, and then to sign up. I mined something, but never got to do anything with it. I didn't get to destroy all the drones before being forced into battle. I got killed the first battle because it un-targets when you move and you have to re-target. Both enemies were firing at me and I was still trying to figure out why my gun wouldn't keep firing. I have to sit still during battle? WDF? There's no GUEST option? Fahk yoo. I don't want to sign up for stuff. Especially if I can't try it out decently first.
Try VORTEX WARS http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /580671
or Shellshock Live v1.0 http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /564049
from my favorites. They let you play the full game, but without EXP or upgrades unless you sign up. I've been tempted to sign up since I've played and enjoyed the games.
Your too-tiny game preview offers nothing to entice me to play it. Sorry. :\
This has potential to be enjoyable.
But if you die, the game doesn't reset. I love the movements. The sounds are good. It has potential to be a quirky, fun game. But when you die, you have to refresh the page. Then you have to sit thru another ad and that Games Factory 2 animation each time, and that's way annoying.
Oh sorry. The frame reset might have bugged on a few frames, you should only have had to press R to reset. Thanks anyway!
Great game!
This is a lot of fun! :D
Great game!
About the only thing I could suggest is to use the space bar instead of the Shift key. The Shift key is a system key, and can cause problems if you push it 5 times in a row on some systems. The space bar just feels natural anyway. Are there health powerups? I got super speed and more picks, but my life was low and I didn't see any life power ups.Good game, though. :)
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