"this game is ''unfinished.'' Please be nice"
Dood. If you submit half a game, you're going to get comments that are "half-happy."
But this isn't even half a game!
It's 1 screen.
He's got no life in his hearts.
The enemies leave before you can get to them.
There's no menu, start screen, end screen, or any way to die.
Why would you submit something like this? It's nowhere near being playable, much less being completed. I gave you 1 star because it looks good. Until you try to do anything.
Please don't submit unfinished things. Especially when they don't do anything. It says right on the submit page: "Your movie must not be a pointless "demo" or "preview" without any redeeming qualities."
Please pay attention to the Newgrounds rules. And if you want good reviews, submit finished games that are good. :)