Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Night Lights]

"Collapse" from the ICO soundtrack! :D

Excellent choice for music! The game works. It's not exactly the most challenging game, but it works, and is enjoyable while you play, so good job on that.

It's got to have more added to make it last, but you did good on this, so I look forward to the next one.

Digitaleyes responds:

Yes! I'm glad you recognized it :)

I plan on adding more, this was just a demo type thing I uploaded because I was excited about my first ever playable creation.

Thank you very much for your thoughts!

[Mondi Adventure!Beta0.5]

Please stop submitting bits and pieces of your game. Finishe the entire game, and THEN submit it.

nikin777 responds:

I need to hear people to know how can i make game better. I will update game at this post and dont create another. And its my first game i am in little nervous.

[RaceCar!!!]

This is a Stencyl tutorial. Don't submit whatever comes out of a tutorial. Many people do that, so this is already on here. Do you know how many times this has been put up already? Here's a few:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /592929 You didn't even change the music.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /591613 This one got blammed for being a copy, but I still had the link.

There are others. These are the ones that I could find quickly, though.

Don't feel bad. It's a typical noob mistake, since you haven't been around a while. Hopefully, though, this review will help you to realize what goes on around here, since you've only been using Stencyl a short time. People get Stencyl or The Games Factory 2 and they do a tutorial and they decide to submit what they created. The problem is that 75 other people have done the same tutorial within the last month, so 74 versions of the same game came thru. (One person had the sense to hold out.) If the game works 100%, then it helps, but more often than not, the tutorial produces a game that isn't 100% functional.

Listen to what people say in their reviews. They'll offer tips to help improve (well, some will). For this game, I'd suggest changing the directional control setup. When you run into a wall, you stay stuck to the wall. Sometimes, games will add a modifier that will turn the car slowly when it noses into a wall to make it easier to get out. When you give gas and you're at a wall, it noses you back into the wall instead of angling the car away from it. Same with boxes and cones. Make them move out of the way when you drive so players don't have to back up to remove them. That's kinda technical, though, and I don't know if the software will allow changes like that.

Next, please DO what people tell you in their reviews BEFORE you submit another game. That way you've actually done something to improve what you have and you won't be submitting the same stuff over and over like some people do.

Lastly, you could submit a new version with every change, but why waste your time and ours? Please finish your items before you send them in. Why submit half a game, y'know? Don't just finish it til it works, but finish it to the best it can be, and THEN submit it. That way, you won't have an account filled with bits and pieces of things.

Hope this helps.

jezus101 responds:

Ok Thanks! ;) Can u get Admin to delete this? im a noob

[Bamboo Balls]

Please don't submit tests. This is pointless. What if it passes? Then it'll be a pointless ...thing floating around Newgrounds forever. That's not what Newgrounds is for. The rules on the submit page even tell you not to submit pointless items (10th on the list).

Welcome to Newgrounds, but yeah, please only submit finished items. :)

TheEighthWonder responds:

I said that this might be worked on. I will be making another game similar to this one. But thanks Simon Cowell. >.>

[Euro 2012 GS Soccer]

Enough with the EURO 2012 stuff!

[Big Bang Theory Test]

Please don't submit tests! This is nowhere near finished. It's one screen and then ...another screen, and that's it.

I know you said in the comments that it's a test. That doesn't matter. This doesn't belong here. This isn't Testgrounds.

Really. They're not trying to rag on you. They're telling you that you didn't make the best decision to release this now. Are they wrong? No. If everyone submits unfinished bits and pieces, how will we know what's what? When you click on a link for a game, you expect to play a game, right? Newgrounds is the only website that doesn't check to see if something is finished before it gets submitted. Now that it's here, now what? You can delete it only by sending a request to Wade. Otherwise, it'll forever be an unfinished bit floating around here, and that's not what Newgrounds is for.

Please only submit finished items.

simplyentertaining responds:

Ok, it's just I wanted to test sound...It doesn't work.I can't delete it (It's not in the new design) and the game is almost done.

[New Super Mario Bros Demo]

Welcome to Newgrounds. Please don't submit pointless or unfinished items. That's not what Newgrounds is about. Thanks.

[Don't Get Blammed!]

It's not a game if you don't have a scoring system, or any way to win or lose.

holyhelltv responds:

you can lose. get hit 3 times.

[Vintage Memory]

These games make no sense anymore. This doesn't even have music. 0/5 1/10.

[Lonely No More]

This game is cool, but the reload times are killing it. It takes about 10 seconds to reload after dying or passing a level. I made it as far as "It felt oike a dream" and then I gave up. By the way, it was a frustrating level. This might be really cool, but the wait time was just too much. I hope you can fix it.