Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[run cycle]

It works. But it's a run cycle and nothing more.

For what it it, I would say- good job. :) 3/10

As far as remaining on the site, though, I've got to say that it's lacking. :\ 0/5

Newgrounds is for finished items. BUt people have been submitting tests, demos, parts, bits, and such for so long that it's started to get thru, and now people don't know what to do. This is a good example. It's good, so should it get blammed? It's not a story, a finished animation, a completed project; it's a mostly finished loop. Should it stay on here with the finished items? This is too good to feel good about blamming, but it's totally lacking in what it needs to stay.

It passed, so it'll stay, but please only submit finished items. This will forever be an unfinshed bit floating around here, since you won't ever finish it. You'll upload the finished item as a new file, and we'll have both here.

And that's one of the biggest problems Newgrounds has now. Unfinished bits and what to do with them. :\

pencilfreak responds:

Ok thanks it's just a run cycle but thats what i intended it to be :) i was testing out flash as im learning abut the program for future jobs, as for uploading it, like i said i'm new to the site and have no idea what is or is not allowed on here but as they excepted it surly its ok but if everyone on here feels that way then i probably won't upload any animation test's as i don't have time to do the standard flash animation styled polished work you see on here.

[Onision Has Spoken!]

If I don't want to watch it on Youtube, I don't really want to watch an animated version on Newgrounds either, y'know? Sorry. :\

IN-the-trees responds:

It's not an animated version, it's an animated parody. Y'know?

[Miss Kitty Sees You]

That wasn't a cat. That was a fox.

I liked it though. :)

Warlord-of-Noodles responds:

there is reasoning behind the name choice.... that is all I shall say for now. ;p

[JACK]

Hey. Listen to this...um, well, watch this flash and listen to the advice. I think it'll really help.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /590285

UberCream responds:

Rather than stacking shit on my walls, maybe I can just record in a bigger room. I'm in this tiny little shitty room with the door closed. That's probably like the worst possible thing.

[a Spider & Pals promo.]

I agree with the red spider.

That boing boing spider was annoying as hell. :\ Maybe if you changed the voice, but I dunno.

Sorry.

Mek1985 responds:

That's alright. Thank you :)

[Zebra Joke: Adapted Horse]

This was so bad, that I almost gave you a...ZEBRO. XD

OMG, I didn't actually say that, did I?

Oh yes I did! :D

At least it had movement in it this time. Keep improving and you might just earn your STRIPES! XD

The music wasn't very good though. Definately not the best I've ever HERD. :[

Alright, no more. I gotta go get me some food now. I'm so hungry I could eat a ... D:

ZebraHumor responds:

With zebra jokes like that you are going to put Zebra Humor out of business! Good job!

Keep in mind, Zebra Humor is a volunteer organization with one person who didn't even know how to put an all text video on youtube 48 hours ago, and only uses paint to animate at the moment. It may not be good, but it is Zebra Humor's best.

The music is where Zebra Humor will have to disagree. It is "Razor's Theme" from Maniac Mansion. She is the most punk rock female videogame character of the 90s, or possibly ever. The song represents the awesomeness of a zebra that goes into bars. Most zebras do not do that!

Thank you for the feedback. Zebra Humor will improve and Zebra Humor will make the greatest zebra joke video you have ever seen.

[Zebra Joke: Knock, Knock]

I like the music. What is it?

As for Zebra humor, I'm quickly realizing that the word "Zebra" and the phrase "there really isn't any" can be used interchangeably.

ZebraHumor responds:

Deja Vu theme for the NES!

[Masters of Movement Logo]

It's too long/slow. There are entire animations that aren't that long.

Also, it's just an intro. It's an intro with no animation or story with it. I know you said that in your comments, but that still doesn't change the fact that it's a beginning without a middle or end. It's an intro to nothing, and that makes it a pointless part or bit of a finished product.

Please don't submit things that aren't finished. This isn't Introgrounds. What you have seems to indicate that you have something cool in the works, so we look forward to seeing it. This isn't finished, though. Please don't submit parts of things. Please finish and submit. :)

SecretiveShaman responds:

Thanks, I know we should release a complete project on Newgrounds but I really couldn't help myself. This was just an experiment to see how general audience would react to my style of animation