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For what it it, I would say- good job. :) 3/10

As far as remaining on the site, though, I've got to say that it's lacking. :\ 0/5

Newgrounds is for finished items. But people have been submitting tests, demos, parts, bits, and such for so long that it's started to get thru, and now people don't know what to do. This is a good example. It's kinda good, so should it get blammed? It's not a story, a finished animation, a completed project; it's a mostly finished loop. Should it stay on here with the finished items? This is good, but it's totally lacking in what it needs to stay.

If it passes, this will forever be an unfinshed bit floating around here, since you won't ever finish it. You'll upload the finished item as a new file, and we'll have both here.

And that's one of the biggest problems Newgrounds has now. Unfinished bits and what to do with them. :\

You also might want to go to the "Creator Resources" link at the bottom of the page. There are tutorials to help with learning techniques to be better in Flash. You can also go to the search at the top of the page and search for 'tutorial' in games. It's not a tutorial for games. It's that most tuts are interactive, with buttons and such, so they're in the games section. And youtube has tutorials; search for 'flash tutorial' and you'll find lotsa stuff.

Hope this helps. :)

iloveawesomethings responds:

Thanks for the advice :)
I didn't realize that this would be either floating around or blammed :\ but if I ever get better, maybe this would be something just to look back on.

Ok, THAT was darn funneh! XD

Great job. Loved the piano. :)

alinhoalisson responds:

Oh, thanks!

It's a bit light on the story side.

Nonetheless, I salute you. How is it that someone with a trial version of Flash can make something that's better than 30% of the stuff that shows up on Newgrounds? It's because you tried and you cared. If more people tried and cared, then Newgrounds could return to being the quality place it once was.

Well done. :)

avhdxrz responds:

Thank you very much for your response, I appreciate it. :D

This reminds of Youtube videos! XD

There are people on Youtube that take their cell phone and record things off their TVs! They record things and the sound sux and you can see the edges of the TV and reflections in the screen, and the quality is always horrible! Can you imagine?! What kind of a loser records stuff with their cam and submits it?!?! XD Anyone who's worth their salt would have enough decency to submit a real file if they have it, not make one by recording off their TV screen. Ha! Those people are real losers!

By the way, I hear everything that comes from Scratch is crap. Sorry. :\

PyrosTheStickman responds:

Remember, you're submitting a REVIEW for this CONTENT. This isn't a place for you to make smug jokes, post stupid nonsense, or act like a total jerk.

Twas good, but... where's the potato salad?

Wrong video??

Greencheekyconure responds:

Haha, yeah.
I was originally going to involve potato salad, but then I could'nt be bothered.

Please don't submit "7 seconds of the whole trailer." If it's too big and it's kicking your butt, then why waste effort on a trailer. Put that effort into the movie so you're not making double work for yourself.

As for thhis, 7 seconds of walking (in a loop!!) isn't What Newgrounds is about. This is a pointless flash, and if it passes, it'll be floating around Newgrounds forever, since you can't easily delete things here.

spacezoomer responds:

Well, sir, if you really feel that strongly about this, then I will not submit another movie until this 7 second clip turns into a 1:11 clip. And I will animate it day in, day out, for however long it takes me. If the finished product still doesn't meet your standards, then I don't know what will. Thanks for the feedback.

Your animation is about 1 second long! Please don't submit small, pointless items. Your submission should have characters and a plot and music, and should be finished before you submit it. Make it a whole, complete, finished item that's really good before you submit it. This is good, and it has sound, but there's no story, no plot, no length, no point to the submission. You did good on this, but it's nowhere near what it needs to be in order to stay here on Newgrounds.

spriter500 responds:

thank you for the advice

Please put more time into your animations.

Yes, I know they're 1-hour animations.

Please put more time into your animations.

pizzabagel18 responds:

Ok. Understood. I will put ones later in the series then. I know these aren't good animations, It's started out just to get faster. But I appreciate any feedback, so thanks.

Please send a message to Wade and request your account to be closed. :)

If you don't want "Youtube poop," then why would you submit this?? :\

Detectonomicon responds:

The main difference is that YouTube poop rarely has animation in it, and my video actually has a lot of it.

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