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[Wip of Slash (Not Started]

Please don't submit things that aren't finished. This isn't even really started, so it's really not ready to be posted here.

xX-SS123-Xx responds:

ok sorry about that i didnt know.

[The 2012 Election]

I couldn't understand what he said.

Kwing responds:

Okay.

[Sudden Attack]

Actually, noob or not, that was pretty good. With the exception of the sound, that is. The sound of the voicework really needs improvement. So, here:

Watch this one:

http://www.newgrou nds.com/portal/view/590285 (Remove the space)

It'll help. :)

Mrcoleman responds:

Ok. I'll check out the link.

[City of Ash]

As a picture it's awesome! But as an animation, it's not. This belongs in the Art Portal. Put it there so I can 5 it, but as far as animation in the animation Portal, I had to give a 0 cuz there isn't any. They do allow animated GIFs inthe Art Portal. There, you'll get a 5.

Zakuga responds:

This isn't a GIF sorry. It's swf, if I could submit to art portal trust me I would of.

[Mario Versus Sonic]

Another Mario versus Sonic sprite aniimation.

...yay.

The animation on the credits was reasonably smooth, but the rest was choppy. Most text went too fast to read. I don't recommend fixing anything, though, because this is a Mario versus Sonic sprite animation after all. So why put in the effort since no one likes those but young teen fanboys, yknow?

RyanAnayaMv responds:

Yeah, especially considering it took me 3-4 hours to make it.

[Lust and Passion Ep: 2]

I think I'll like this, yet something's wrong. The sizing screws up. The beginning is fine. When she's kneeling by the duck, her head is cut off. Same as the fish is winking. Then, when Lola shrinks the guy, it's fine, yet after he's looking up at her, the rest is sized out of view. Tried several times with the same result, in-page, and as pop-up. Too bad, cuz this looks fun.

Flaxington responds:

Yeah the vcam was being a bastard. Its fixed now.

[Preview of SLZG]

What you have here is well done. But the voice is annoying, and there's not nearly enough of the story included yet, so that makes it pointless and annoying.

I'm looking forward to the finished file, but please don't submit pointless things.

ieJoMaFLo responds:

Yea I realize its not much, but I did this to mainly just test what I have so far. I wanted to see what people thought was good and what needs to be worked on for the final product. And yea I'm not the best voice actor, but I thought the annoying voice fit the character fairly accurately! :D