Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Epic Hard Maze 2.0 Remix]

The game works, but that music is absolutely horrrible! D:

[The Donkey Race]

HE doesn't stay up, down, or 'out' long enough. I'd jump but he comes down before the gate has passed. If I wait, it hits him.

[Gentleman Ta Ta Ta]

Enough with the PSY stuff. We don't like him any more. :\

[Return of the King]

English, please. We'd like to what's going on. :)

[Getting Jiggy With It]

This is not a game. Nor is it an movie. Welcome to Newgrounds, but please try to keep it relevant instead of pointless. This may be ok on Steam, but please hang out on Newgrounds for a while before submitting, so you can get an idea of what Newgrounds is all about. :)

[TW3 Full]

You're welcome...

...to message the author and ask him to bring it here.

You're not welcome to 'bring it' on your own. Submit your own work.

IPoopReeseCups responds:

I'll have you know I am one of the production managers for this game and have claims to it as well as afro-ninja.

[soccer skill 2]

Too many ads.
Too little time on the clock. ...so you get more ads played.
Add a reset button on screen so if I know I've missed the shot, I can reset before having to sit thru the booing and the clicking of the retry button, and of course, having another ad pop up.

These games must be a cash cow for you. It takes about 2 seconds to play and/or screw up on a level, and then there's another ad. With 16 levels, and annywhere from 0 (lvl 1) to over 10 screw ups per level (some more, some less), that's over 150 ad views for you. Raking it in with your little shovelware games.

[Regreso a casa-homecoming]

-Looks good.
-Music is good, but it eventually stops.
-Crying is annoying! There's too much of it. :(
-Controls are bad. He often kept walking when I took my finger off the key.
-Layout is bad. When you walk down the first 'egg' looking thing right there at the beginning, he often goes right off the cliff. When coming down off an angle, you have to leave sufficient flat space for the system to recognize that he's not still falling.
-Play is bad. I made it past the first enemy, and hid in the tree area til the second enemy was gone, but when I went forward, he dies with no enemy around.

It has potential, but it has a lot of problems still.

[Grand Estuary]

This is Newgrounds. If you want to submit games here, make them playable here. I refuse to sign up somewhere to play a game that comes to Newgrounds. If I went to your site, I'd not be surprised if I had to sign up. And I'd close the window and wouldn't play. If you come here, tho, make it playable here.

[ShyClops Demo]

What you have looks, plays, and sounds decent, but there's not nearly enough to it yet, which makes it kinda pointless to submit.

The control is fine. The music is good. The background sometime moves way too much when you jump, making it rough to watch. Backgrounds should only slightly move since they're far away. When he squishes against a wall, that's just weird.

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

theinsanebox responds:

Man, I just have to say... Thank you. I really think you gave me hope. I have just barely began creating games and such, and I want to make it up there with the big league. I will take your advice, and set out on my journey.