Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Earn money online]

Yeah, stick to games and animations. This is not Newgrounds material. :\

[rpg philip adventure acti]

It looks good. Sounds are ok. Instructions are unintelligable. They're written so poorly that they make no sense.

Also, did you try this out?

-Did you kill the lower enemy (the rabbit-looking one)? He doesn't jump high enough to get back out of the lower section. Killing the rabbit is a trap.

-If you choose not to save, the game doesn't know what to do afterward and ti freezes.

-The text moves way too slow. Just put it up. Scrolling is cool, yet annoying.

-After you exit the shop area it returns you to the menu. But when you try to start again, no player appears. It's the game level but no player or info bars.

-The controls could be tweaked. Try to keep the control commands together and the action commands together. Up to jump and arrow keys to move. A,S, D, Z, X, C, Space Bar, etc. to do things. THANK YOU for not dong the typical noob thing and using Shift, Ctrl, or Alt for play keys. People do that allthe time, and yet, these are system keys and they cause problems, but people use them all the time. Well done for NOT using those.

this is better thanthe tutorial stuff you've been submitting. If this is straight out of a tutorial, it's one I'm unfamiliar with.

With that being said, please do not submit tests or incomplete items to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds? Now, there are demos on here, but this is nowhere near the demo stage. There's just not enough yet.

A low-end demo should have about a third of the final content; 3 levels out of 10, 2 out of 5 stages, etc. Enough to give a decent try of the game, but not the whole thing. ...although, submitting the whole thing is best. A good demo has half to 75% of the levels; enough to get the player hooked, but having the end cut off so they want that last piece.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck. :)

[Infinite Gaming]

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials do. Since it's a Stencyl platform tutorial, it might be removed.

Keep working at it. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Shoot Em ALL!]

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since you're not actually creating your own game, you're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials do. Since it's a Stencyl platform tutorial, it might be removed.

Keep working at it. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[mini market tyccon]

You MUST be the creator of whatever you submit. Uploading those "Add this game to your site" games doesn't count. You have to be the creator, not just the downloader. Submissions stolen from elsewhere will be removed, as you noticed your first ones were. That's why. Hope that explains a few things.

[shooter amn]

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since you're not actually creating your own game, you're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials do. Since it's a Stencyl platform tutorial, it might be removed.

Keep working at it. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

philipv11 responds:

but i dont are good at do a game

[The Gong-Construct2]

Why do you keep removing and resubmitting this? Leave it alone already, geez. :\

[LOTR Olympics]

This is not fun. Sorry. :\

[Pro BMX Challenge]

The controls are absolutely terrible. Did you try this before submitting? If you push forward long enough, you flip over. Also, it's annoying to have to go through the menu again if you fail. Keep the option to go to the menu, but add a 'retry' that actually starts you over at the beginning of the level.

[Counter Force]

Please put your games in ENGLISH so we can understand everything that's on the screen.