Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cookie Monster (Snake) 2]

Ha! That was a trip! I actually have the real arcade version of that game (SF2). It was trippy seeing all the intro and all the sounds. Unfortunately, the power supply broke, so it's in storage. :\

This was the first version of Snake that I've stayed with for more than about 15 seconds in a long time. :)

[Dress Up Game]

She's not smiling. :\

(...and the music wouldn't shut off.)

[Chibi Wing]

What you have is decent, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless to submit. The mechanics work. The characters look good. Sounds and music are needed, of course. It's a decent start.

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

[The Black Knight Rises]

This has potential to be good, but why does he move so slow?! He needs to move faster, as it really makes the game drag thru the walking sections. Also, he swings his sword slow. And, jumping... he jumps high enough, but I still found myself falling short on jumps of 3 (6?) squares. With a better walking/running speed, I should be able to clear these, as he his jump height is good.

Also, could you add 'Options' to the Pause Menu? I tried this on 'Low' level thinking that maybe the laggy speed was due to high Quality level, but even on low it was the same. However, to get out, I had to refresh. Quitting via the Pause Menu only takes you to the level select, not the Main Menu.

This has a lot of potential, but it got to be a pain in the butt entirely too soon. :\ Can't wait for a redo, tho, once you speed him up.

[Extreme Tetris]

NEEDS a high score board! :)

sunnydk87 responds:

Lol! What score did you get? Do I need to make the next one harder? =P

[Ultimate Super NES Quiz]

Make the answers clickable. It suck to get an answer wrong because it's misspelled or has "3" instead of "III" or whatever. Plus, it just sux having to type everything in.

[Bart Saw Game 2]

Bart.
Saw.
Obama.
Saw Obama.
Saw Bart.
Bart Saw Obama.
Obama Saw Bart.

You have very few ideas. :\ That get really repetative. Just like this gameplay.

Try something new; new characters, new gameplay, and, PLEASE, new music!!

[Iron Hawk_test]

Please don't submit things that aren't finished. It's a waste of everyone's time to do such things. Who wants to play unfinished games, y'know?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

NG link: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-i nformation/content-submission

Good luck! :)

[AS2 platformer engine]

Please don't submit things that aren't finished. It's a waste of everyone's time to do such things. Who wants to play unfinished games, y'know?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

NG link: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-i nformation/content-submission

Good luck! :)

[-steve-]

Please don't submit things that come from a tutorial or from Publicly Downloadable files. It's against the submission terms. But also, this is kinda pointless. Would you want to play a 1 level game? Would you want to come back to a site that is full of 1 level games like this one? It's bad for Newgrounds and for your portfolio of submissions. :\