Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fighting Is Magic Lvl1]

Please do not submit tests or incomplete items to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds? Now, there are demos on here, but this is nowhere near the demo stage. There's just not enough yet.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission (Remove any spaces)

Good luck. :)

Exedor
Newgrounds Elite Guard

[Obama Ride]

Please put effort into game creation. This is horrible.

[Gangnam Gem Collector 3D]

No more Gangmam! Please! >:(

It's time to move on, Fortunacus.

[snowslaughter]

Please do not submit tests or incomplete items to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds? Now, there are demos on here, but this is nowhere near the demo stage. There's just not enough yet.

I never threw a snowball. I only clicked and they disappeared. :\ What you had looked good, and the music was good, but it's nowhere near ready to be submitted yet.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission (Remove any spaces)

Good luck. :)

Exedor
Newgrounds Elite Guard

[Doctor Blocks]

Isn't this a Stencyl tutorial?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials do. Since it's a Stencyl platform tutorial, it might be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

DoctorBlocks responds:

Thanks!

[Should I finish this game]

Isn't this a Stencyl tutorial?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials do. Since it's a Stencyl platform tutorial, it might be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

P.S. No, you shouldn't. ;)

[Fly or Die]

Please do not submit tests or incomplete items to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds? Now, there are demos on here, but his is nowhere near the demo stage. There's just not enough yet.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission (Remove any spaces)

Good luck.

WBGAMING responds:

Thanks did not know that was just looking for a place to put my game on the internet to test it.

[Alien Approach]

Isn't this a Stencyl tutorial?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials do. Since it's a Stencyl platform tutorial, it might be removed.

Keep working at it. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Invaders]

Isn't this a Stencyl tutorial?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials do. Since it's a Stencyl platform tutorial, it might be removed. I did like the music, though. And thanks for putting in a menu with the controls listed and such. Most people don't do that when they submit this game, and yes, there have been others that have submitted this exact game.

Keep working at it. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Hardcore Fighter]

What a fun little game. :D

Some suggestions:

-Make the power bar change color when you can shoot.
-Actually, that's all I can think of at the moment. Forgot the others. xD