Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fling the teacher - Binar]

Isn't this a tutorial or template?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it might be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck.

mpbramwell responds:

thanks for the respond. however its apart of my grade (i'm into teaching) and the swf was giving a little trouble uploading to this website i'm building, then i remembered that its possible to upload in newgrounds.

[Crane simulator machime]

Isn't this a Stencyl tutorial or template?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials do. Since it's a Stencyl platform tutorial, it might be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck.

[Neon Pong]

Somebody FINALLY made some decent improvements to Pong! :)

duckdoom5 responds:

Haha, thank you ;p
I've been making games for about 3 years now, but my art is always quite bad. I hope I made it look descent enough xd.

I've actually edited some of the graphics for the settings, but for some reason the new file is not showing yet.

[flo]

I have no idea what I'm doing. I'm wandering thru the fog, meeting cute little critters, and I'm quite entertained. I don't know what they want me to do. I've gotten all but 4 icons, and I'm wandering around and enjoying myself and the music. I don't know about this one, and yet, I have no complaints. I'm lost and entertained. :3

I found Flo! <3

:3

Still don't know what I did, but it was fun. :3

[Bike Stunt]

Bike Stunt is an awesome bike driving game...not.

Gameswala... hand picked games ...that are crappy.

Did you play this? He flips over and can't be righted without resetting the level. Where is the bar that shows how much damage I've taken?

Your tags are wrong, too. Please include "shovelware" in all your tags so it is tagged appropriately.

[Hello Kitty's Muffins]

Never add the chocolate chips before mixing it up. The mixer will tear up the chocolate chips. Stir them on with a spoon.

And where is the recipe? It says what to add, but usually there's a rundown at the end with the amounts of each ingredient, and the full recipe instructions for us to copy. What good is a recipe game that has no recipe?

[Beanie Boy: Recharged v2]

Please do not submit tests or incomplete items to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds? This is not ready to be submitted here. There's just not enough to it yet.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission (Remove any spaces)

Good luck.

Exedor
Newgrounds Elite Guard

[Beanie Boy: Recharged v1]

If it's broken, please remove it. You can unpubllish it in the project systen where you submitted it. Please do not leave multiple versions of the same thing up. Especially if they're broken.

[Invasion Force: Prelude]

The idea is good, and it looks good, but it's way too slow and you run out of things to get.

The guy gathers things waaaay too slowly.
There aren't enough places to build things.
The barricades take up so much wood that by the end of round 3/4, you're out of barricades and the wood to build them so the enemies just run on thru. But you've got plenty of stone.
They aim at whoever's the strongest. so often, they were shooting at the 3rd guy instead of the mostly dead guys that are running right past.
Guard Shack doesn't work.
I want to upgrade and make thngs stronger, but can't.
Sometimes (often), the tree-cutter guy stopped coming for a time. I couldn't gather for like a whole minute, which is a while in this game.

It's playable, but it's not easy or particularly fun. I was fallign asleep while playing this. Really. Of course, it is 1 am. But still.

[nyan cat shooter]

How can we shoot with B when there's no ship?

Please stop submitting things that don't work.
Please stop submitting things that come from from Stencyl templates or tutorials!

Make YOUR OWN game. Public files will be deleted. You should be aware of that by now.

Exedor
Newgrounds Elite Guard

philipv11 responds:

okay how do i do a game and its hard to make game shelf without tutorials on it