Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hug me baby one more time]

Is there more to this picture? It seems very pixelated for charcoal. I'd like to see the rest of it. :)

Athalina responds:

Yes, there is. The pic is stretched out that's why it turned out that way. The drawing I have in my file is too small so I had to enlarge it. I can scan the original drawing again if I have the time to.

[Photobomb]

The thumbnail cropping thing still has issues. I always have to argue with it a few times before it works. Just retry a few times.

I like the idea behind this one, but the splatter/drops filter just makes it look dirty. Without that, it'd be great. :)

draneas responds:

Yeah, I tried, but nothing happened ^^' Anyway, thanks and yeah, you're right. Need more textures...

[Predator's mask]

While I think this and your other 3D work is detailed, it still seems incomplete. It all looks like a mass of modelled clay; sculpted, but unfinished. I know you've put in highlights and some color, but we can barely tell. This needs a lot more coloring, and less shine. You made the eyes a different color, so now change the color on other elements. It needs a full color treatment so it looks like a piece of equipment instead of a piece of 'computer clay.' I hope that makes sense. It's not bad. It just doesn't look 'finished.'

[Like tears in the rain]

You only chose that phrase so you could draw Adrian in the shower. ;) I know you too well! :D

[Goddamn raytracing]

6 hours? Geez. Of course, the extreme size could have something to do with it. Why does it have to be so big? It looks nice at 8" x 2" (approx) on the Newgrounds page, but I can't get a good view of it because if I bring it up to full size, it's so massively outside the size of my screen that I can't appreciate any of it. How about 1375x437 (one fifth scale) or 2291x728 (one third scale)? It would also help the file size. I never thought I'd see a file size that huge! 17.8 mb is so massive that it's actually slowing Newgrounds as I type this. I type and then look up and only then do the letters show up on the screen.

It looks nice! I like it. But it's just too massive.

[ID 2.0]

I like it, but the two dots throw the whole thing off. If they're pads for glasses, you should add some indication of frames to indicate what they are, even if you keep them slight. It looks like she's got 2 large moles on her face. :\

[Seraph 2: Arella]

Make more.

:)

BicPenmaster responds:

lol wow I just saw I had a comment. xD I just might do that ^^

[friendship is hot]

Applejack needs a hat, though. This is funnee!! XD

[Wrestling]

MUCH better than "Pony!"

I'm still waiting for "Pink" or "Teddy" or "Supergirl!" :)

C'mon, man. Give 'em up!!! :D

(For those who don't understand, look them up on his DeviantArt page. Then harass him about it in your review!)

[Bite :3]

I love it...

... but it needs some background color.