Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bunny Eating CD]

It's very cute! But it's also very fuzzy. :\ Is there any way we could get this replaced with a better scan? I had to re-scan mine several times to get it just right, so I know it's a pain. But this isn't getting a fair shot in its fuzzy form.

[Iron Man]

This is good, but NEVER fold your art! ;)

[The Deadeye]

The picture is very small, but it's good. Do you have anything larger? :)

[TM 2- Sweet Tooth]

Twisted Metal 2!! Yeeeaahhhh. :D

I refuse to sell my copy! :D

Needs some background, butit's good.

Michael2882 responds:

Never let it go brotha! And well as for the background it was either white or black since anything else I feel would detract from the piece.=)

[Unknown]

There's an awful amount of white space in your work. That makes them look unfinished. :\

Michael2882 responds:

I'm barely good at character and backgrounds? Psh I suck at those! But thanks for the honesty friend!=D

[Covenant Butterfly]

NIce! Though, color would absolutely set this off!

[Popocatepetl e Iztaccihuatl]

Hola, Nat! :D

Shouldn't she have hair covering one eye? ;)

[Edge of Essence]

Hi bud! Well, while I love your other work, this one...not so much. It kinda looks like hair and ...wax or blood. Love your others, though. :)

Alldin responds:

haha everyone has their opinion ofc =) Well this is not really hair or any simple hair function from the program, its actually particles that are animated and forming the shapes of those metalic wires, and additional to that I added some liquid with black/red organic patterns and shapes to it.

In other words, something very abstract =)

[Judgement Cover]

I be envying one o' dem characters, there. ;)

[Corrupted Haunt]

The lower part is nicely detailed, and the top part has detail and interest... but the middle seems a bit ...unfinished and plain. It seems to be a landscape of gradients with no detail. The gradients seem very plain. The contrast is really high. The lights are light, and the darks are very dark, maybe a bit too much. It needs some texture or detailing to make it lighter, brighter, and make this section fit into the rest of the composition just a bit smoother.

Personally, I like to see color, but if it's a black & white comic, color isn't an option, but it makes the contrast more important.

Ethaneth responds:

This is quite possibly the most fair critique I've gotten, thank you!

The Haunt from the actual comic is very plain, and made with light gradiants. I wanted it to resemble it in the corrupted version, hence why it's like that. I sort've wanted all of the attention to go to the middle parts of the piece, but I fear in doing so I sacrificed the rest of it to the realm of bland and boring.