Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unknown]

There's an awful amount of white space in your work. That makes them look unfinished. :\

Michael2882 responds:

I'm barely good at character and backgrounds? Psh I suck at those! But thanks for the honesty friend!=D

[Covenant Butterfly]

NIce! Though, color would absolutely set this off!

[Popocatepetl e Iztaccihuatl]

Hola, Nat! :D

Shouldn't she have hair covering one eye? ;)

[Judgement Cover]

I be envying one o' dem characters, there. ;)

[Corrupted Haunt]

The lower part is nicely detailed, and the top part has detail and interest... but the middle seems a bit ...unfinished and plain. It seems to be a landscape of gradients with no detail. The gradients seem very plain. The contrast is really high. The lights are light, and the darks are very dark, maybe a bit too much. It needs some texture or detailing to make it lighter, brighter, and make this section fit into the rest of the composition just a bit smoother.

Personally, I like to see color, but if it's a black & white comic, color isn't an option, but it makes the contrast more important.

Ethaneth responds:

This is quite possibly the most fair critique I've gotten, thank you!

The Haunt from the actual comic is very plain, and made with light gradiants. I wanted it to resemble it in the corrupted version, hence why it's like that. I sort've wanted all of the attention to go to the middle parts of the piece, but I fear in doing so I sacrificed the rest of it to the realm of bland and boring.

[At Least She's CutE]

She can sneak up on me in the forest. :D

...I never go to the forest. :\

[Skull]

Now, I understand WHY people put copyright stamps into their pics, but GAW! that's annoying when they're right in the middle of the action! :\

[mehlettelponeh]

Dood! This is quite a drop in quality from your other stuff. You might want to step it up a bit.

Your other stuff was interesting and all, but this one's kinda rough. :\

Have you got anything like your Robot Day submissions in the works?

VidGameDude responds:

Looks like someone didn't read the description.