Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Assault mech]

As interestin as these are, where's the color? It's really lacking without it. It just is unfinished and grey.

Zanroth responds:

Like I said: materials coming soon.

[Psyber Hotspot]

It's actually pretty good. I like this probably the most, or amoung the top of your work. The green boogers coming out of her nose are not desireable, though. You may want to re-color those, although nose piercings (and face piercings in general) like that are kinda yucky anyway. :)

MAKOMEGA responds:

maybe she grabbed a cyber flu by the internet that is why boogers is drained from her nose.
I had realized that look like snot but leave it and thank for the review lol

[Spear]

I like it. She looks good. The main issue I have, though is the lack of background. Even adding a color to the back will do. BUt having a nice drawing on a plain, white backgrounds really makes it seem unfinished.

Good work. Make more. Get rid of the white space. :)

Cenaf responds:

thanks i ll keep that in mind

[The Oneironaut]

This looks like it could be one of those super-duper mega ultra probably-gonna-take-you-months-to-complete mega-mazes. People pay money for those, by the way. :)

[Lilith sticker]

I like this. Finally someone drew her without stupidly large breasts. She looks very nice. the only thing I'd suggest is a background. Even a background color is better than white.

[Banda Uó]

It's a good picture, but how is this rated E??

[Square]

That's a perfect square.

[Romantic evening.]

...not the most attentive lover, is he? :D

[FOR GREAT JUSTICE]

Launch all zigs!