Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Psyber Hotspot]

It's actually pretty good. I like this probably the most, or amoung the top of your work. The green boogers coming out of her nose are not desireable, though. You may want to re-color those, although nose piercings (and face piercings in general) like that are kinda yucky anyway. :)

MAKOMEGA responds:

maybe she grabbed a cyber flu by the internet that is why boogers is drained from her nose.
I had realized that look like snot but leave it and thank for the review lol

[Spear]

I like it. She looks good. The main issue I have, though is the lack of background. Even adding a color to the back will do. BUt having a nice drawing on a plain, white backgrounds really makes it seem unfinished.

Good work. Make more. Get rid of the white space. :)

Cenaf responds:

thanks i ll keep that in mind

[The Oneironaut]

This looks like it could be one of those super-duper mega ultra probably-gonna-take-you-months-to-complete mega-mazes. People pay money for those, by the way. :)

[Lilith sticker]

I like this. Finally someone drew her without stupidly large breasts. She looks very nice. the only thing I'd suggest is a background. Even a background color is better than white.

[Banda Uó]

It's a good picture, but how is this rated E??

[Square]

That's a perfect square.

[Romantic evening.]

...not the most attentive lover, is he? :D

[FOR GREAT JUSTICE]

Launch all zigs!

[Smokes]

It's good and all, but can you make anything, um, pretty? They're well done, don't get me wrong. I mean, I like looking at deformed, damaged, skinless people with open nostrils and no irises as much as the next person, but they're just not exactly pleasant to fap to.

Can you make some more like Orbit, or Android, or Cybike? Journey's End and Waiting are great as well. Maybe the disembodied heads are getting to be kinda like eating the same food everyday.

tlishman responds:

Haha, thanks!

I appreciate your comments, its always great to have feedback. These are pretty easy to knock out as you just sculpt and flow with your imagination. But i'll take that in mind and maybe think about producing less extreme pieces.