Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[BATMAN:ROGUES GALLERY (Batman & Black Mask Fight Full Scene)]

Much improved, bro. :)

BronxBrother responds:

Thanks, with the help (and motivation) of our community I changed the affinity of the cpu from 4 to 2 (as this old software works only with that) - still choppy here tho - (unlike my exported version)

[neet ep 66 FINE! iLL GET A JOB]

Why do you always make them so loud?

ZabuJard responds:

IT IS MY GIFT (BUT ALSO MY CURSE!!!!!!!!!!!! OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[KillLaKiss]

What is this a clip from? Or, did you animate it yourself? The music was annoyingly loud, and I use the term 'music' lightly.

Bofdal responds:

The clip is from ep 22 of Kill La Kill
I apologize that the music was so loud. I keep my headset around 40 and when I turned it up to 100 I realized it was really loud I will change that l8r. The reason I used that "Music" is just my artistic Opinion on the matter.
I really appreciate any comments that will help me learn to do this better. I know this isn't the best but I think it is ok for a first try. If you have any more criticisms I would love some helpful tips on how to be better.

[D&D Animatic Episode 1.1]

With more animation and color, these could be good. However, there's barely any animation; it's almost a slideshow. And the absence of color makes it seem horribly incomplete. Please finish, tho. :)

TheCopperArmStudio responds:

Thanks for the constructive-criticism Exedor, My original intention for these shorts were to have colorful and more elaborate animation but due to college it gets hard to fit it all in when I have school work and such to focus on. Though future episodes will have color and more animation in them.

[Bloop- MN9music]

This music should be uploaded to the Audio Portal. However, 'visualizers' do not count as animations. This is not allowed in the Animation Portal.

Deze muziek moet worden geüpload naar de Audio Portal. Echter, 'visualizers' tellen niet als animaties. Dit is niet toegestaan in de Animation Portal.

Goozie-Productions responds:

Oww we are sorry..
We won't upload visuals anymore on the animation tab.

[This Is Richard (WARNING: EAR RAPE )]

Let's try again, without the ear rape.

JaybotMechaniac responds:

the whole point of the video is ear rape dude , if you dont like it then this video is not for you kid

[Some Yo-Yo Stuff]

I like the music. The pixel man was kinda cute. You live right on the water? How cool is that?! The problem I have with this is the real life stuff. You've been on here long enough to know that Newgrounds specializes in animations and shuns real life video. Heavily enhanced real life video might stay, and even garner a decent score. This, however, was non-animated, and it will do poorly. Do you have any animations?

AustinJayCook responds:

Yeah i actually expected this, im sorry about this i just wanted to see if this would go well and test the waters with a small yoyo video.... Im actually very sorry i do know that its not an animation and ill be taking this video down today, and sadly not, animation is on my bucket list of things to start but voice acting comes first, one thing at a time, and thanks very much for your imput dude i wanted to see how this would go and you helped me understand what to do and what not to do here :)

[Chibi Intro]

It was very cute. It was only an intro, tho, and an intro without anything behind it, y'know, like an episode of something, are kinda pointless. So, I guess, this was cute and pointless. :) Please bring us an episode! :)

creativeblackmind responds:

Thanks for your feedback. Still learning tho! Will try my best to make a complete episode :)

[A Message for my Girlfriend.]

Because she's a higher class girl than you deserve, bro. :)

spidee responds:

Damn :/ Wanna help a brother out?

[Barbi the Barbarienne movements]

Please don't submit tests or unfinished items to the Portal. That's not what it's for. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>"Jump to Forum"). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

misterprickly responds:

Thank you for your input.