Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just A Run Cycle]

This was decent, for a walk cycle. The progressive building up was nice.

As a submission, though, this was a pointless submission, as it had no story or plot. This really isn't the place for this, though. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

Johnopotamus responds:

Alright! Thanks a lot!

[The Ghost Pianist]

SahWEET!! :D

Alldin responds:

thnks m8 =D

[Collaboratory Passing]

Wow. This was tough to rate. What's with the screen capture? That's a prime way for people to submit things that are not their own, so don't do that. If you've got the file, submit the file. If you dont, why not? Stick figures...whoopee. Yet, it was still well done and mostly interesting, so that's good. The movie was 3:00 and the credits were 2:25, which means this was almost half movie, half credits. That was kinda rough. But I liked the ending song, so that helped. So this had some good, some bad, and some inbetween. Like I said, this was hard to rate. :\

BryanBULLETHEAD responds:

Something weird happened with the upload I had to convert it to a avi file with camtasia studio. This is my collab though. I'll try to fix this.

[Dishonored :Unlocked]

Ha! If all 'my first animations' were like this, Newgrounds would be awesome again! I was worried when I saw your comment, but this was awesome! Thank you for putting real effort and pride into your work. It definately paid off!!!

UmbralTide responds:

Thank You, that's really nice and a big relief.

[Walking animation test]

This was decent, for a walk cycle. There was a slight jump in the loop transition, so add in another frame and put in an inbetween pic to level it out and make it a bit more smooth.

As a submission, though, this was a pointless submission, as it had no story or plot. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

Bradez97 responds:

Thanks for the info :3

[Speed Painting #1]

Hi, and welcome to Newgrounds. This is a big video! And frankly, I didn't watch it all. Speedpainting is sometimes cool to watch. Speedpaints are usually 2-4 hours condensed into 2-6 minutes, but at 28 minutes, that's as long as a full Simpsons episode.

Now, you do know that Newgrounds is for animation and games, right?

The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games.

This is screen-capture video, and so this is better suited for youtube. :\

BrandonVinall responds:

Yeah you're right. Thanks!

[3d LoZ Intro Animation]

What you have is good. But please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-i nformation/content-submission

Good luck. :)

KnightGamer1000 responds:

Actually this is finished work to be stricking honest. Plus this is my first video I posted on this site. I thought I start out small and work my way up. Best I do that than work for hundreds of hours for a first video and then get shot down. But thanks for saying that it is good I appreciate that. :)

[Clara C - Hum MV]

"Subscribe to my youtube"

Why would we want to subscribe on youtube when we can follow you here? Newgrounds is better for this sort of thing. Youtube can keep the blah-videos.

This is very nice!. Animations like this are more than welcome here. :)

Who is the singer? There are no music credits.

Rikognition responds:

Ok. Just want to try to make good stuff for people to enjoy. Credits in title and the side - Clara C Music btw

[Fatman Begins]

The jokes aren't funny. The story drags along. The audio is poor (watch this: http://www.newgroun ds.com/portal/view/590285, it'll help). Sorry, but this is just not good.

straberrykiler6789 responds:

1. you think jokes aren't funny.
i am sorry you didnt like the jokes
perhaps you could say why and perhaps tell me how i can improve
maybe its just not your kind of movie

2. you say the story drags along
this point constitutes a greater level of constructive criticism
you are suggesting that i shorten the movie a little or perhaps "improve it"
you dont say what is wrong with the story besides it dragging on

3. The audio is poor
ok, i agree with you to some extent on this
i only recorded part of the the song
but i had to compress the audio alot
i am guessing from the video you linked to you think the recording was the problem
that was AlexanderThe9th

you said "Sorry, but this is just not good."
youre just apologising as not to seem rude
and telling me you dont like it
but i cant please everyone

[Megaman Generations Ep 0]

It wasn't bad, but how will anyone know what's going on when it's in spanish? Can you put it in english so we can follow along?

mikexdporsiempre responds:

Now read the description of the video and see :)