Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Peg Leg Pete Reviews:Uncle Grampa]

The animation was basic, but passable. What's really hurting you is the sound quality. Watch this one: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285. It's by Ricepirate and it's all about how to improve what is the biggest problem here. I hope that helps. :)

NewOutletAnimation responds:

That was my first attempt at animation like 6 months ago. I've since gotten mics and a decent recording area. I do appreciate the help though. I'm obviously still really new to the art.

[Draining Endorphins - Right Now]

Welcome to Newgrounds. The first thing you're going to figure out is that, since this is an animation site, including any real life video aspects is going to kill your score. There was some stop motion in this, and it was ok, but the amount of real stuff overpowered the animated bits. :\

ILLLOGIC responds:

This is something I was totally unaware of. Thanks for letting me know!

[Draw the short straw]

You're on the right track. But this was just a bit too scattered. Keep at it, tho. :)

SpookyWagons responds:

Thanks, yeah eventually I'll work on something with a bit more direction.

[Dragon Ball Super Fan Animation W.I.P Ssg Goku vs Beerus]

Youtube? Or, you could bring the video here. Why go to youtube for something that can be viewed here, y'know?

This was good, but was very short and incomplete. Would love to see the full thing here. :)

Levionix responds:

Sure thanks for the critique

[Edwin's Cat - Outing Preview]

Actually, it is coming along nicely. Yes, it's choppy, but there have been far worse things come thru. Please keep at it, but for now, this is still just not far enough along.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

IkkoArts responds:

Oh. I didn't know. Thanks for the advice. I'm sorry.

["Semi-Respectable" Show - Episode 3 "The Human Resource"]

I'm looking for a job at the moment, and this not only rings true, but you have just put a legitimate fear into animated form. x)

SemiRespectable responds:

Thanks! That was the goal. Much appreciate the comment & review!

[ToonBoom Test]

It's good, but it's nowhere near ready to be put up.

MrChambers responds:

did you read the title?

[Test Animz]

You must be the creator of whatever you submit. It's in the rules. Bring your friend over and have him make his own account. :)

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

MynokX responds:

yes i am my friend helped me make this so we worked hard on this short animation, thanks for the advice. :)

["Battle of the Sword Masters" Corona Zoro vs. Samurai Jack - Short Trailer -]

The animation was ok, but the credits are twice as long as the animation!

8ThoughThomas responds:

It´s just an test, because I just began on the animation so.. :)

[L.O.L.a. Mask Test]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. It wasn't bad, for what it was. I guess you succeeded, then. I haven't learned masks yet, but hopefully soon. :)

Whetsit-Tuya responds:

I didn't try to submit anything to a portal, I want this to only be in my channel.