Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TWO BREATHS WALKING WORK IN PROGRESS]

I wish it was finished. There's not enough to it yet. Scored 0 on this one, but you can expect better once you get it completed.

Veesama responds:

Yeah it definitely will be! I hope that I can finish it within December/January but it really depends because that's a faily busy time for me.
But no doubt I will finish it! But this is just the WIP. :333

[Gotta Meme]

This was good. What's with all the negative comments [from you]? If you can't be proud of your work, how will your viewers be? ;)

RetroTurtle responds:

This touched my heart, thank you. But I really want to do better work. :/

[Sparky The Intolerant Spoon Opening]

And you chose to submit this version?

-You may not submit photography/video of naked people engaging in sexual activity.
-You may not submit photography/video images of excessive gore and/or "snuff."

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

DementedCartoons responds:

Sorry let me change that

[Kawaii Kitten's School Life (FANIME) EP3]

The art could use help, tho, I do see some improvement. If you're going to continue with this, tho, please replace her whiny voice with a normal one. It's irritating. The story is ok so far. Although, having the dude change into a cat girl...wtf? Oh, and quit it with the different color eye thing. She looks better with blue.

InusTrash responds:

Thank you for the criticism c: I'll make some tweaks. And Alli-chan (the orange hair kiddo) is genderfluid, or that's all how I intended them to be

[Bee stick]

Not bad. You should do more with it.

B-Roger responds:

not bad... im a tgn partner and my videos get calificated , this one got 5 stars -awesome-
why people cant assume that if something is good it must be recognized, not bad... fuck that men.

[My own video reproductor]

You should call it "Family Fire Trailer." The current name makes no sense.

MDAStudio responds:

This video has a sense, it's my first try with ActionScript and I did want show the result in Newgrounds. Tomorrow is the really trailer of the Family Fire don't worry ;)

[walkman-tan]

Это мило. Продолжать совершенствовать и создавать больше и лучше творения. :)

oshiaberi responds:

Обязательно!

[Blue Sky - Original Trailer]

Looks interesting, but there was too much echo in the voice. Combined with the accent, I couldn't understand what was being said.

MDAStudio responds:

Yeah I understand, I'm from Spain and I'm learn the language. Soon I will upload in Spanish, the quality of voice it's better.

[Aooah]

It was a fun lil video. You should change your short description, as Newgrounds shuns live action, it can negatively affect your score, especially since it's all animated, and well done at that. :)

Moogasta responds:

haha i should change that, i did it because it made me laugh. Thanks for the tip!

[A message for the fans]

Your sound quality definitely needs help. Watch this one: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285 That's you in a nutshell.

Broompusher responds:

gay