Low score cuz it's unfinished. PLEASE finish! <3 <3
So cute. x3
Low score cuz it's unfinished. PLEASE finish! <3 <3
So cute. x3
The whole thing is finished, just needs to be cleaned up! Will post sometime in October!
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Seriously, bro. Go leave feedback for your buyers. It's a mark of a lazy ebay seller.
What?
Thou shalt not stay gone so long.
I always forget about that 11th commandment ;P
It's a simple starter animation, and you've got the hang of it. If the background was brown instead of white, this'd be better. Keep at it! :)
Thanks for the feedback man!
Yes, the animated parts are great, but the audio needs help. Here, this will help: https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285
Do not submit things you did not create.
We Just Made A Hindi ( हिन्दी) Version Of The English Video Which Is On YouTube.
You're improving, but please don't submit tests to the Portal. You can upload into your Dumping grounds, and then post the link into one of the many Madness forums. That'd be a better place for it. :)
Thank you, actually, for telling me that, i'm pretty new to this website, so I don't know how to do most things, but thank you.
No spoiler warning is ok, I guess. However, there was no warning about the E rated animation with the massively violent outro at the end. Might want to make a different one for E and T rated and use this for M and A rated submissions.
Spoiler Warning in the Description
Well, it's a couch, and some laughing, and really, that's it. There's nothing about story; there's no animation; there's nothing informational or plotwise about it. How can people give opinions on nothing, y'know? Add a synopsis, animation, characters, and then maybe you'll have a better chance.
Thank you for your response,i will add more details next time
I hope you're not complete with your submission yet. That way, you can capture more.
This one is at such a bad angle that not much of the artwork can be seen. Plus, it's incredibly slow. If you can, I'd recommend placing the camera from a higher vantage point and have it looking down. Also, increase the speed to something higher than double speed.
The video will be more interesting when the details emerge faster, and when we can see the details that are emerging. ...and, some softer music might be a better choice. The current music doesn't really fit very well, and detracts from the enjoyment. :\
Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on a new work space and angle as I know this video is very crapy. I'm hoping to have more uploads in the future, of time lapses of my drawings but I'll definitely make sure the artwork is visible next time :)
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