Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bridge to Life]

Thou shalt not stay gone so long.

nahtanojmal responds:

I always forget about that 11th commandment ;P

[Zombie animation 2]

It's a simple starter animation, and you've got the hang of it. If the background was brown instead of white, this'd be better. Keep at it! :)

IJustLoveToDrawBro responds:

Thanks for the feedback man!

[PAPERTHIN Rebels Chapter 10]

Yes, the animated parts are great, but the audio needs help. Here, this will help: https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285

AguRex responds:

Thanks a lot.

It's not working

[Doki Doki Literature Club - Alternate Ending]

No spoiler warning is ok, I guess. However, there was no warning about the E rated animation with the massively violent outro at the end. Might want to make a different one for E and T rated and use this for M and A rated submissions.

mohawkade responds:

Spoiler Warning in the Description

[Haunted Hospital Project #1]

Well, it's a couch, and some laughing, and really, that's it. There's nothing about story; there's no animation; there's nothing informational or plotwise about it. How can people give opinions on nothing, y'know? Add a synopsis, animation, characters, and then maybe you'll have a better chance.

iuidmiul responds:

Thank you for your response,i will add more details next time

[The making of my Under the Surface drawing]

I hope you're not complete with your submission yet. That way, you can capture more.

This one is at such a bad angle that not much of the artwork can be seen. Plus, it's incredibly slow. If you can, I'd recommend placing the camera from a higher vantage point and have it looking down. Also, increase the speed to something higher than double speed.

The video will be more interesting when the details emerge faster, and when we can see the details that are emerging. ...and, some softer music might be a better choice. The current music doesn't really fit very well, and detracts from the enjoyment. :\

Willow2491 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on a new work space and angle as I know this video is very crapy. I'm hoping to have more uploads in the future, of time lapses of my drawings but I'll definitely make sure the artwork is visible next time :)