Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tentacle Biscuit]

nice

Tentacle cookie.

The voice acting was not very good. You should fix that.

It's like a sail cookie.

I shouldn't have watched this.

It's got tentacle, therefore it's hentai.

Is this rated properly?

Is that the cookie that the internet's always talking about?

The credits were ...uninformative.

The animation is lacking.

I'm pretty sure this gave me seizures.

Twice.

The Replay button does not work.

FREE Minecreaft codes are a lie.

I don't know who did the music cuz it wasn't in the credits. Was that The Who?

This was not very original the second time I watched it.

Too many ads.

Flashes do well when they look good. This didn't. Get out the ugly.

This is a total rip-off of Tentacle Bento.

Don't feel bad, bro. None of my flashes have good ratings either.

So, like, if I was the last person on earth, and it was just me and this flash, and we were all that was left on the earth, and that was it...I forgot where I was going with this.

Post this review in 4 flashes and you'll be ...an ass and you'll get banned.

WOOT! All my 1's go to this! :D

[Earth Saving]

"This was a good idea."

...until they remembered that they didn't bring any women with them.

xD

[Lebbert Robot Day 2013]

What's the song you used for the 'sad' scenes?

ZabuJard responds:

i dont remember :(((((((((((((((((((

[My intro]

What you have is decent, but it's incomplete. It's an intro to nothing, which makes it pointless to submit now.

Please don't submit parts, bits, and incomplete items like this the Portal. If you want feedback, help, and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

[24hr Toon: The Last of Us]

What you have is pretty good as far as color; sound is good, the story's ok too.

With that being said, please don't submit incomplete items to the Portal. If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items, and this is kinda-mostly leaning toward done at best. If everyone submits unfinished bits to Newgrounds, then this will quickly become a site that no one want to come to. Please finish before submitting to the Portal.

However, for tips and suggestions, the Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

[Mega- Man Vs. Wood- Man]

Actually, it wasn't too bad. It ended abruptly. Add in a title screen and an ending and it'd be passable for a completed project.

Go to my most recent news post for tips and tutorials that might be helpful; especially the tutorials.

Take your time. Realize that it takes a lot of time to do this, and keep practicing. :)