Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Fox Tale (Rough Draft)]

This looks like it could be a good story. However, it's not ready to be submitted yet.

- The art was good. The drawings were nice. The simple format is actually an acceptable way of doing things. That works.

- Animate it. This was too slow to be animation, and it dragged on. It was more like a slideshow, and technically, slideshows aren't allowed on Newgrounds.

-The music was great.

-Keep your hands out of the pictures. Also, try to keep the edges straight. When the pages are moving all over the screen, it's very distracting.

I look forward to seeing the finished version of this. :)

[Clockwork Gentleman]

Wow! That was fantastic! :)

Marcomatic responds:

Thankyou Exedor!

[Gaucho fencing]

Increase your frame rate and take LOTS more pictures! These are WAY too choppy. :\

Thaiel responds:

Yep, i got confussed and changed the settings. I thought it was time per pictures, but it was the other way around, so it kinda fucked up.