Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TWO BREATHS WALKING WORK IN PROGRESS]

I wish it was finished. There's not enough to it yet. Scored 0 on this one, but you can expect better once you get it completed.

Veesama responds:

Yeah it definitely will be! I hope that I can finish it within December/January but it really depends because that's a faily busy time for me.
But no doubt I will finish it! But this is just the WIP. :333

[Gotta Meme]

This was good. What's with all the negative comments [from you]? If you can't be proud of your work, how will your viewers be? ;)

RetroTurtle responds:

This touched my heart, thank you. But I really want to do better work. :/

[Intro for upcoming animations]

Please don't submit an intro to an animation without having the animation to go along with it. That's kinda pointless.

Also, if you didn't create it, then please do not submit it. If there was an episode along with this intro, then you'd be fine cuz you created the episode, but since this is only the intro that you didn't make, it actually violates the rules.

- You must be the creator and owner of the content you are submitting.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

[Sparky The Intolerant Spoon Opening]

And you chose to submit this version?

-You may not submit photography/video of naked people engaging in sexual activity.
-You may not submit photography/video images of excessive gore and/or "snuff."

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

DementedCartoons responds:

Sorry let me change that

[Kawaii Kitten's School Life (FANIME) EP3]

The art could use help, tho, I do see some improvement. If you're going to continue with this, tho, please replace her whiny voice with a normal one. It's irritating. The story is ok so far. Although, having the dude change into a cat girl...wtf? Oh, and quit it with the different color eye thing. She looks better with blue.

InusTrash responds:

Thank you for the criticism c: I'll make some tweaks. And Alli-chan (the orange hair kiddo) is genderfluid, or that's all how I intended them to be

[SAILOR MOON CRYSTAL HENSHIN]

If you didn't make it, please do not submit it. This isn't youtube. This is Newgrounds, where artists display their own work. Enjoy.

[Bee stick]

Not bad. You should do more with it.

B-Roger responds:

not bad... im a tgn partner and my videos get calificated , this one got 5 stars -awesome-
why people cant assume that if something is good it must be recognized, not bad... fuck that men.

[My own video reproductor]

You should call it "Family Fire Trailer." The current name makes no sense.

MDAStudio responds:

This video has a sense, it's my first try with ActionScript and I did want show the result in Newgrounds. Tomorrow is the really trailer of the Family Fire don't worry ;)

[sonic and rainbow dash turn super form]

Please do not resubmit something that has been blammed. When you submit something, the Newgrounds community votes on it. That's what we do here. If the score is good at a certain point, it passes and stays on the site. If the score is not good enough at a certain point, it gets blammed, or deleted from the site. That's what happened to your submission.

Don't let that discourage you, but rather, keep trying and make your animations better. Your artwork needs improvement in this one. The story was kinda short and didn't really go very far. The sound was better in this one than the other one (which was quiet), but both had background sounds in them.

Go to the news post in my profile for tips and tutorials that might help.

As for this, it's been removed since it's against the rules to resubmit blammed entries: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

[Duper Crash Cuh. Theme (Beta)]

Please post audio in the Audio Portal, not the Flash Movie Portal.