Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shinkiro]

Nice!

Thank you for taking time to make something great. So often, people use their noobness as the excuse to submit poorly done bits and pieces.

This was really well done. If this was your first, I look forward to seeing your second.

Well done. :)

NebulousDawn responds:

Thank you very much!

[SME Tribute Movie]

This is pretty cool. Did you show your mommy?

[Workers Wanted]

Please don't submit requests to like this the Portal. If you want feedback, help, and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

[Pikmin Tree]

I can tell a lot of work went into this one. I'm unfamiliar with the game, so I know some nostalgia was lost on that aspect of it, but this was good. Your frame by frame is improving. The proportions of the characters were much more steady than in some of your other submissions. Definately a notable improvement on this one. Good job on that. :)

Well done. :)

artistunknown responds:

Woo improvement! Yeah, I've noticed that my proportions would tend to get all messed up, so I'm glad I'm finally getting that down. It's a shame you haven't played Pikmin, it's a really fun game series. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it!

[Unicycle Romance]

The story was likeable, but fades, blurs, and gradients REALLY slow things down. It was running about 2 frames per second at the beginning, even on low quality. If you redo it without the fades and blurs, it'll speed it up greatly and it'll possibly be a nice, cute short. :)