Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paper Box Zelda]

Ah, there's definate improvement from earlier works. Actually, this was pretty good. Although, I got completely lost when the Fallout guy came in. I was enjoying the story, so it was kind of a bummer when it ended. I wanted to see what heppened next. x)

Cute, and a definate improvement. :)

JackKSchroeder responds:

Thank you very much! It seems that my ending is not that popular. I will work better on the writing for my next one.

[Zelda- Mole Mitts]

Ok, that was funny. xD

Contunued improvement on the drawing and animations, so that's good.

Nicely done. :)

Gawd, it's been a long time since I've played Zelda. :'(

artistunknown responds:

I'm glad you found it funny, and I'm glad that I'm improving. I certainly took the extra time to make things look nicer and make the line quality better. And you can't imagine how much Zelda I played while making this ;)
Thanks for the review!

[Dante Goes Fock]

For a first piece, it had a lot of good aspects to it. It didn't have much (any) story to it, but you're on the right track.

Go to my most recent news post for tips and tutorials that might be helpful, especially the tutorials. You've got the right idea, and with some training added, you could really do well.

Good luck. :)

PonyStew responds:

Thanks, pal :3

[Memphiston's Intro]

What you have is pretty good, but there's not enough to it. This is a beginning, but with no story behind the beginning, it's a beginning to nothing, and that's a pointless submission. Please don't submit "parts" to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck. :)

[Sonic Title Remake ;)]

Please do not submit tests to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds? This is a beginnning, but with no story behind the beginning, it's a beginning to nothing, and that's a pointless submission.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/h elp-information/content-submission (Remove space)

Good luck. :)