Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Masters of Movement Logo]

It's too long/slow. There are entire animations that aren't that long.

Also, it's just an intro. It's an intro with no animation or story with it. I know you said that in your comments, but that still doesn't change the fact that it's a beginning without a middle or end. It's an intro to nothing, and that makes it a pointless part or bit of a finished product.

Please don't submit things that aren't finished. This isn't Introgrounds. What you have seems to indicate that you have something cool in the works, so we look forward to seeing it. This isn't finished, though. Please don't submit parts of things. Please finish and submit. :)

SecretiveShaman responds:

Thanks, I know we should release a complete project on Newgrounds but I really couldn't help myself. This was just an experiment to see how general audience would react to my style of animation

[KetchupVsMayo]

...just wait til Salsa shows up! :O

:)

[Walk Cycle]

It works. But it's a walk cycle and nothing more.

For what it it, I would say- good job. :) 3/10

As far as remaining on the site, though, I've got to say that it's lacking. :\ 0/5

You're right, though. You're getting rusty. It's been over a year since you submitted Pumpkin Dissection. Where ya been??? :)

Mukki responds:

lol you give out tough reviews, i'm going to take yours as a compliment. 3/10 is pretty generous. as for where i've been? working on a tv show called unsupervised. :D

[New Nazo Design]

Dood. Stop submitting bits and pieces. Everything you've submitted is a small part or a bit, but you haven't submitted any full animations yet, as in: having a story, characters, and a beginning and an end.

If you want to put up pictures, do that in the Art portal, not the Flash portal.

Everything you've done is parts and bits and tests. This isn't Testgrounds, so please don't submit things that aren't finished.

waelalz responds:

I think you dont like reading the DESCRIPTION, IAM PUTTING THIS UP SO YOU CAN VOTE IF I SHOULD PUT THIS DESIGN IN MY MOVIE OR THE ORIGINAL ONE AND THATS WHY THERE IS AN EXPERIMENTAL TAB

[AAE Titles Voidwebber]

What you have here is nice. It's cool and quick.

But this is still a pointless submission. This is an intro to nothing. Please don't submit intros with nothing afterward. It defeats the purpose.

[Over Itself]

The flash is fine.

...but this isn't a kids' site.

ChomPet responds:

Please rate properly. I need rating on the content of flash, not how this flash fits into this site. I'll report this as abusive.

[Stick sk8boarding]

Bad flash. :\

True message. :D

MistyE responds:

ttd