Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[AnimatedPanel: Lightning]

As a picture, this gets a 4. As an animation (movie), it gets a 1. This would make a great GIF to be submitted to the Art Portal. But as far as a story, with a plot and sounds and characters and music, well, it's lacking all of that, and you did submit it to the Flash Portal, not the Art Potal. My best suggestion would be just that: publish it as a GIF and submit it to the Art Portal. You're heading in the right direction to make great animations, so stay with it.

As art, this is great. As a movie, I gotta say no.

[B&W Groove]

Black & white & totally groovy! :D

[School Project Commercial]

It's ok, actually. You should change the icon, tho. The picture doesn't go with the animation.

[5 Nights at Freddy's]

OMG!! Jaxxy is back with us!!!! :D

jaxxy responds:

I'VE BEEN HERE! I SWEAR! I always stop by to watch stuff and play games. :3

[Anicetus Animatic]

You're right. It's very unfinished. :\

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[sprite animation]

What you have is pretty decent and it'll be interesting to see what you have for us in the future. But this is not complete, and without a story or plot with it, it's a pointless submission.

With that being said, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

Marc-Alex123 responds:

k whats the minimum length